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It’s culture context beyond your comprehension she/her

[finchsbadhairday]

#45 is up! Choices

Please and thank you <3

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[daelmoon]

So here I am again expiriencing feeling...unfortunately.

This soo curuel to just skip the Mira and Lyonel part and it not even done on the other fic 😂. I was like...did I miss somethig... What is happening...than I went back and read the notes like should in the first place. But it is very sad, Roland and Mira, I want to bring them together, this third fic is the most unpredictble for me, becasue the two previous ones where obviously shockig and suprising but you kinda know where it is going, Lyonel is chaos, as is it should be honestly.

But thankfully we have another progress wit Bae&Aly. (Btw I noticed but forget to write that Baleor in previous chapter called Alysanne as Aly, just in his thoughts but still) And the calmness of Baleor whas really trensfering tgroug the screen bc I went sleeping very calm and relaxed. Next chapter I assume will be the tourney so we will get some scheming learnig 😜. Btw in Maekar fic we got Maekar teaching Elayne how to write and now Baelor is teaching Aly how to...idk actualy, but I see a pattern here...

We can only end this comment with a cat in the sink

Btw, the toothbrush is unclamined so there is no cat teeth mix here ( i think it is mine but i have diffrent now so idk, it is my parents house)

[finchsbadhairday]

#44 is here!

I sat down intending to write a simple conversation.

Several thousand words later, Baelor Targaryen has suffered a complete and irreversible realization.

Thoughts and prayers for him during this difficult time.

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[daelmoon]

A man in love:

Nothing more to describe this is Baelor.

"Grumpy did not begin to cover it." - the name Maekar shoudl be a verb at this point.

"Maekar was Maekaring today"

I love that grumpy man who is not able to express feelings without dying first.

"Baelor’s gaze fixed on Jayne, the child's peaceful breathing"

I miss read and read "his child's" and alnost died, but this is just results of long shift. But I am waiting for that.

" You're in love with the woman."

How dare you Baelor, be in love with a woman...during a pride month...discusting! Thank god for the comming threesome.

These men act like children, but i need Maekar to mock Baelor so much that he will be the most mocked person in the westeros

[finchsbadhairday]

#43 is up!

Guys... do I start the Lyonel story now?? <.< Read the chapter and tell me if that feels like a good starting point for some different POV's! Thank youuuuuuuuuuuu

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[daelmoon]

She will never take off that necklace, i wouldn't either.

I love more girl power and sister hood, but poor Maekar, i kinda want to know why Elayne was such menace...what dirty things they were doing there...

I love angry Maekar, always makes me smile.

What do you mean Lyonel story...like his pov or full blown fanfic?

[daelmoon]

I am watching a show and they just mentioned pine cones. I am not good

[finchsbadhairday]

Yes, next one is up!! #41 Split

We're having Mira, Ser R., Baelor, tea, Jayne, a tourney ground and a surprise guest!! Buckle up!!! >:)

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[daelmoon]

Your story telling is so much better in this fic, you are adding good side plots (that is destroying us all bit okay) and the whole story feels like there is a lot of thoughts and planning behind it. It makes me scared how your 3rd fic will look like.

Nontheless Hounds of Summerhall will always be superior

They are finaly moving with their feelings, if not Symon they would for sure break that desk 😏.

And the sisterhood? I think Elayne could help Mira becasue they both come from tough places and she knows thing or two about inapropriate relationship with somone she should not even think about.

And the stag boy, perfect introdaction...ive read all the comments under the stroy about threesome theory like i wasnt here two night ago batteling you over that...i want my contribution recognised ⚔️🤺

And I am not the person who nit picks on fanfics, and choosing from the show, from the book or mixing it all is allowed but do love my blue eye baratheon

[finchsbadhairday]

#40 Threshold

I am legally prohibited from discussing the contents of this chapter. Something may or may not have happened. Someone may or may not have lost their entire mind about it. The void is open. Enter at your own risk.

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[daelmoon]

I have no words...this was perfect.

Baelor finally smashing down that manchild...the whole feast reminded me of the hunt with Maekar, Elayne and Baelor, the atmosphere was simillar...oh...i need to die a little today...the shovel might be useful actualy.

Roland and Donnel gossping about what they just saw

[daelmoon]

@finchsbadhairday my state right now after that conversation:

And how many chapter i will have to wait now? I regret asking questions...

[finchsbadhairday]

#39 it's here, it's there, it's every-fucking-where Roy Keeeeent... wait no, wrong fandom

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[daelmoon]

Bunch of fucking virgins.

Making an experiment? My god, she is crazy but i wonder what kind of experiments 😏 she will do after all this...wahtever this is.

I can jsut imagine Baelor going nuts in his chembers after that library night looking at the pinecone and sweating like he has menopause.

But the tourney is coming...so is my anither husband i hope 😏🦌

[finchsbadhairday]

It's here! #38 Books

>:)

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[daelmoon]

They act quiet green for being widowers who are supposed to get married, Im sure Matarys has more game than those two.

I know it is a slow burn but let just add some fuel into that please...

And idk why but after i read rhe chapter i went to sleep and i dreamt that Maekar wanted to sabotage the weeding for some reason, i don't remember details...😐

Take all the rest and distance you need! Even log out of the internet if you need that and do not put pressure on yourself, the fact that you want to respond to all the comments with attention and care is already great!

[finchsbadhairday]

#36 Dragons

It's heeeeeere. READ

[daelmoon]

Cutness overloaded

This chapter brings so much calmness and peace and softness, i almost melted here. Alysanne finaly letting go of her walls and noticing Baelor in diffrent light, and Baelor kinda enjoying being a "father"...buterflies everywhere.

But the fact Aly just said the friendship is being formed...devastaiting...and she still called him your garce instead of Baelor...there is still a long way to go

Quick technical question, was Jayne supposed to say that "asking question makes you smart" twice or is it editorial mistake? Hard to say because kids repeat the same shit all the time and I dont know if it meant to be it.

[finchsbadhairday]

#35 is hereeeee! Reckoning

That's not ominous at all... 👀

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[daelmoon]

Aerion and Daven in one chapter...can it be worse? You will propably make it worse. At least Baelor only gad to deal with one of them, Maekar finaly disciplined his kid, i need Maekar and Baelor to have a conversation about him, I still hope you coudl fix Aerion personality but it doesn't seem like you have that intention.

Baelor and Alysanne mutualy heating how much their children remind them of themseflves (gramma has left the chat). Will there be more conflict? What if Baelor will be a good father to Jayne and Valarr will be a little bit jaelous why Baelor couldn't be a soft father to him? And he will balme himself that he wasn't enough to deserve ithat soft love?

I can imagine now Alysanne in her room somehow knowing abut the dinner party and not being part of taht dinner and thinking she doesn't really belong...

[finchsbadhairday]

The Conversation is here! #34 is UP!

what's in it? A conversation... just two people talking...

that's it <.<

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[residentblackheart]

having read this before does not make this any less intense or intersting

like i have been waiting for this one

2 am rewrite is wild but not surprising.

new scars? SCARS FROM WHAT?! when did those happen? like frfr, my brain is thinking but i cannot come up with anything.

Alysanne having the 'headache' instead of Baelor seemingly symbolism for the change of their roles right now because Baelor is usually the one that needs to talk and her to listen while also bringing her to speak about what interests her but she is most likely gonna talk without being pressured.

i pulled that string out of nowhere and went with it

I was very good. I only cried at night.

Finch, don't make me come over to wherever you are after you mentioned what Jayne said

i was actually mid reading something else but Baelys are more important

Alysanne waiting for Baelor to speak:

SHE IS USING HIS TITLE AGAIN. UGH, we come so far and yet not at all

break — dinner time

Baelor looking at Alysanne knowing she is overthinking:

FOUR BETROTHALS BEFORE 15, omg, get her away! Hate her father, like he did not even care about his daughter except what he could gain with her and of course Lord Farquad is the same way.

Being married before the mourning blacks fade is wild. Is that even allowed because I'd think it looks quite unfavourable on the family.

Real question is why Lord Lychester never had a son before with another wife, NO ONE wanted bro.

Alysanne is such a good mother.

i know what is coming and i am SCARED.

“I think you should break the betrothal.” — i am not okay (i promise)

OMG, ALYSANNE THINKING TO CALL OF THE BETROTHAL. I CANNOT

Finch, let me at you!

me at 2am:

me rn:

BAELOR, OH HOW I LOVE YOU MORE WITH EVERY WORD FINCH WRITES DOWN

Baelor will be such a good dad to Jayne and Alysanne will be such a good mom to Valarr and Matarys while DD can suffer with blood climbing up his throat.

how this conversation felt:

If they have a child it will never know it's father. OMG, I CANNOT. STOP ME FROM THINKING

add angst even when not needed. noted, got that for my own notes now.

[daelmoon]

I love reading these comments bc it points out things that ive missed. New scars? I thought that were the old ones... and i did not connected the headeach parallel, is it time for Baelor to bring Aly some tea? Or smth stronger

[finchsbadhairday]

The Conversation is here! #34 is UP!

what's in it? A conversation... just two people talking...

that's it <.<

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[daelmoon]

I've had such a relieve when I had read that, I expected, a bloody massacre, arguments, Aerion, anything, but thankfully, you gave us an adult conversation that ended with a contract kind of sounds like 50 Shades of Grey, but I never seen that movie, so I don't know.

I am so glad we can see the growth in Alysanne, that she decided not to fold anymore, but to stand her ground and be strong, despite all of the consequences she could face. And Baelor letting her speak, I'm sure no man ever let her speak for that long. And I'm just, just so much in love with them. And I just, I, I, I need them. I need them more. I need them all the time. I think about them all the time at work. What they do, what's gonna happen, will you kill us all with this? I don't know what to do.

Take your time with the next chapter. I know there's a lot to happen, some sort of trials, for the manchild.

I know, I know the story is not about him, but I need Maekar. Because when Alysanne came to the room and Baelor looked at her, for sure, for sure, (Macron voice), he saw, he saw how Baylor looked at Aly and he has to come and he has to explain to his brother that he is in love. Oh. And I want Baelor and and Jayne. And I need Jayne too. I don't know what I need. I need something

Bdw i am too tired to write so i dictated everything to my phone circling in my room

[daelmoon]

I am physicly missing Mae&Elay, Bae&Aly 😔

[finchsbadhairday]

#33 is here and with it The Anvil

Read and suffer enjoy here

[daelmoon]

That was great.

I read the political stuff and thought it had to be a naightmare to write, all the reserch and thinking blee, I would give up. Gladly you did not. You are writing a person who is smart and has a phd in something and now you realise you need a phd in that. But it was perfect.

You hit to close to home actualy. I feel like Baelor. My younger sister is married, my older bother is getting married, I am the one last standing Bachelorette. Baelor's monolog could be mine.

I was smiling whole time but at the same time scared of what might happend, and nothing happend. I can crown you a qeen of manipulation and mixed signals. But it was a great idea to introduce us to the conversation with Bae pov and then i guess we will get Aly pov.

[finchsbadhairday]

#32 is here!

Aly's POV. Just a short one tho. Enjoy! <3

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[daelmoon]

Aaaa So much happend. Aly can't just accept the pure kindness and the fact that Bae dosen't see lier but a woman who did what she did to survive. He knows she dosen't fully trust her but he knows he needs to earn it and not demand it. If they could only read echothers minds.

And you wrote Jayne perfectyly, curious child who knows what is happening around. I love how Aly relised that she is the example for her daughter and if nothing changes she might become so sad and lonely like her. Jayne and Baelor seeing the mistakes they made while raising their children is so poetci because both of them think of each other as perfect parents but the only thing they see in themselfs are mistakes they made in difficult situations.

I need Mira to meet Maekar and Elayne and question why are they together, because I guess from the outside they look like weird couple. And I actualy stand with Mira because when i saw Maekar in AKOTSK i thought about the same thing, he looks like he needs to be punched in the face.

One last thought, i think at some point of the story Alysanne needs a greenhouse, or some other room where she is doing her herbal (drugs) stuff because she might be doing it all in her bedroom which has to look weird with all the pots, dried herbs and jars. It can be like in the Ghibli studio

Bdw you wrote a lot about salt, i can almost smell it, especialy becaue the strom is coming and i have the window open. You posted it in a perfect weather.

[finchsbadhairday]

Chapter #31 is online!

A new day, a new Baelor POV. What could go wrong...

Be happy here

[daelmoon]

So, to start with Maekar and Elayne short story, I am so happy to see him so in love with Elayne, and he loses his mind as soon as he smells her. I just love him so much, and he shows his emotions so freely, and he doesn't care about anyone else, what they think about him. He is there, and he's the problem, and he doesn't care. He is the problem, but I love the problem

Bae wants to be part of that happy family the girls created, but he doesn't know how. He looks at his own family and he knows he did do enough for them. He did what was expected of him, but that wasn't enough. And now, when he looks at Maekar's happy family plus Aerion (where is Daeron? Justice for the drunken), and he sees that the brother who went through the same thing as him was able to build something real and honest and loving, and he can't do that, that will destroy the man.

Aly can't look at Bae bc she is either in love and doesn't know what to do or she feels like she has to repay him somehow for this kindness, I can't really read this woman. But Elayne is there and she is so straight forward, I am counting on her.

The tension between Valarr and Baelor... I know nothing about this