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1. Horrified that her grandson is unknowingly involved with a married woman, a middle-aged hypochondriac grandmother turns private detective risking life and limb to expose the truth and protect his soul from the fires of hell.
2. When a middle-aged hypochondriac grandmother learns that a married woman has beguiled her grandson into a serious relationship, she turns private detective to expose the truth and prevent the eternal damnation of his soul.
3. A meddling middle-aged hypochondriac grandmother determined to protect her grandson from the fires of hell turns private detective and risks life and limb to expose the truth about his conniving adulteress new girlfriend.