Is this bad?
For my fanfic, “I’m Broken, and No One Can Fix Me”, there is a scene in chapter 7 in which Alberto is seen in a similar light.
While this scene was dramatized in the movie, I personally liked the cliché lightening strike in the background, indicating that the “villain” is going to do something bad.
It just fit the movie so well, making the small things seem larger and more important. (Not that this wasn’t important.)
I couldn’t resist adding a similar experience to my story, I really wanted to use this moment, as a way to highlight the different scenario I’ve created, and show that Alberto is the true monster in the situation, not Luca. (Kind of like how the movie did with Ercole).
It gets better though, don’t worry.
I’m working on the newest chapter for it, which I plan to have out later today or tomorrow. If you would like to check it out, here it is.
AU Human Alberto, Sea Monster Luca.
It’s a work in progress, and I’m a relatively new writer, so I apologize in advance for any rough patches. (Nobody dies, in case that worries you. I could never right that stuff. I love the poor boys to much).