I played the demo. The conversation with Tobias was really good and I enjoed it immensely! But I'm not sure if Arthur's part works correctly? No matter how many rude\angry choices i pick MC still agrees to race him, jokes with him and even blushes? I get it, we need to flee to the garden together but then we somehow on a friendly terrms? And MC can't ignore him? Sorry but this reads like a big tonal shift to me
That's weird! If Mc doesn't have a good relationship with Arthur then the tone should be quite different than what you describe. Mc and Arthur go to the garden together, but Mc sulks, they get bored when Arthur talks about his family…The race also takes place but a Mc who does not like Arthur does it to prove their superiority and looks down on Arthur when the latter hesitates. I'll have to check what's going on.
