Uhh, excuse me? I was distracted with this interaction between Melgren and Ulices. Any history you wanna spill, miss Rebecca Yarros?
Also, I don't know why but Violet and even Xaden describes Melgren as somewhat unnerving... but here I am fighting my laugh because he's surprisingly... FUNNY?
This dialogue was between Mira and Melgren LMAO both were so deadpan oh my gods why am I still laughing? This was a serious meeting for crying out loud!
I think Aaric's signet would be acceptable if one of the themes of this series was defying fate and going against the status quo but it's not so we just have a walking spoiler in our hands
we need more limitations to the signets!! we also need a better structure that designs signets!!
with how over powered signets can be and giving EVERYONE the wildest signet of all time (despite the fact that wielding the elements like fire and water are supposed to be the most common. we just threw that information out the window), it is difficult to understand what the limitations of these powers are
from Violet all we get is physical exhaustion and a burning pain from when she's learning how to master it in IF, but beyond that signets are still ill defined.
which makes it all the worse when you have riders doing straight up wizard shit. Rhiannon pulling shit out of thin air from another location. Quinn making straight up projections of herself to confuse an enemy. like this is X-men level shit. Dain is a watered down version of Charles Xavier.
and then there's fucking Aaric's signet along with Melgren's because they both have a foresight/precognition problem. we do not know the limits of their signets. would Aaric be haled as some sort of oracle? what happens if he spouts off a future that goes against the wishes of Navarre? would they kill him for that just as they kill inntinsics?
Melgren's only ONLY makes sense if you put severe guardrails around it. if he can see the future outcome of a battle, does that help with directing troops? does he know when it's a lost cause? how far in advance can he see the future? how does this help him become the greatest general this military has ever seen?
i can go on. i SHOULD go on about this because im still damn peeved that we know barely anything about these signets
Book 3, probably
Melgren, interrogating Violet about Varrish : So, you killed him because Self-Defense?
Violet : ...
Melgren : Self-Defense, right?
Violet : I mean, it rhymes with that word.
Melgren : ...what did you kill him for?
Violet : Petty revenge-
If magic demands balance on both sides between riders and Venin… what if General Melgren is the other Venin traitor…
"I’m the only one who can give you access to your son."
"I have another."
We know that there is another traitor hidden in our midst.
"Initiates, asims—we're all traceable to one another, but the great hall could fill with Sages and Mavens and I'd never know. Neither would you. Makes you wonder who's been channeling here for years, doesn't it? Who's been trading information for power?"
Rebecca has made a point of telling us that there could be a very powerful Venin and we would all be completely unaware.
"She's their answer to my mother."
"She was the answer to me," Theophanie hisses.
But this biggest point is the fact that Aaric is a precog… seeing as that’s a pretty rare power, what are the odds that magic demands no balance there? Allows two to exist on one side?
That suddenly another one appears for no reason, right now (when we know signets are based on need and frequently filling gaps)… among a group of first years that already has proof of this very action with Lynx becoming a shadow wielder, as Xaden becomes Venin.
"I don't understand. You're our generation's shadow wielder."
"Not anymore. Magic knows. He's the balance."
What if Aaric is the balance, because Melgren is the Venin.
Xaden Riorson and his lost sister.
Synopsis: Xaden is known as an only child due to his sister who 'died' during the Rebellion. Little do they know she didn't die and has been so close this entire time.
A/N: This is my first ever fan fiction I have written, so please be kind! Also happy to take any advice. This is quite short but wouldn't mind maybe making this into a few parts? Maybe with Liam x Reader or Garrick x Reader?
The Lost Sister Masterlist | Masterlist
From my tower I have what some would consider the perfect view of the parapet for conscription day. The perfect view of seeing those falling to their death trying to make their way into the riders quadrant. And soon it will be my turn. My heart beats faster at the thought. And its not the parapet that scares me. Its who I will see on the other side. The friends and family who think I'm dead just like my father. Instead I was taken captive and trained by General Melgren.
In his eyes I was young enough to not understand what was going on completely. He thought me young and naïve enough to be angry at my father for being apart of the rebellion. For turning against our own. But the black mark starting at my wrist and weaving its way up my arm and up my neck is a reminder of where my allegiances truly lie. Of who I really am.
A knock on my door startles me as I turn to see a guard standing in my doorway. He nods his head and motions for me to follow him. My time to cross the parapet had come. I cross the small room and grab the pack from the end of my bed. As I pass through the doorway I hear the screams of another candidate as they fall to their death from the parapet.
As we cross the courtyard I look up to see a group crossing the parapet with ease. They are too high for me to be able to see who they are. But by the way they cross the parapet as if its second nature to them, I know they are not first years. And it means General Melgren has gotten his way. I will pass the parapet last while they are all in formation. No distractions.
As we reach the top of the tower, the guards who lead me here step to either side of the archway. Infantry are not allowed in the riders quadrant. A nod them a thanks before adjust the pack on my back and taking the first steps onto the parapet. And suddenly I am glad for the training General Melgren had put me through. Every day for the last 5 years he had made me walk across various beams and walkways in different scenarios and conditions. None of them this high, but I now understood what he was preparing me for.
Despite the rain having passed the wind is still strong and the stone of the parapet is slick and slippery. And yet again I am thankful for General Melgren and the gear he had given me to wear for today. Despite him wanting to use me as a weapon and turn my on my friends and family, he had given me the best training to prepare for today and what awaits me on the other side. I take the last steps off the parapet and into shelter and come face to face with the very man himself. General Melgren.
The look he gives me is almost proud. “You passed that better than some third years. Clearly I’ve trained you well.”
I bow my head at him. “I didn’t expect to see you today General.”
The smirk he gives me sends a chill down my spine. “And miss seeing your brothers face? I wouldn’t miss today for anything.” He gestures with his arm for me to follow him through the archway and into the rotunda.
As we pass through other riders flank my sides, almost as if they are hiding me from what's ahead. I look up to see Dragons around the edge watching everyone closely. And judging by the smell and a few black patches on the ground we pass through, it seems a few first years have already been claimed.
An eerie silence has fallen around us. All eyes are on the General and his entourage making their way through the rotunda. He never makes an appearance on conscription day. He usually doesn’t show up till Threshing, not wanting to waste time on those who will not making it through the next few months. As we pass through all the cadets stand up that little bit straighter, and bow their heads as we pass.
“General. To what do we owe this pleasure?” A voice calls out. A very familiar voice. Its someone I know. But who?
“I have another cadet for you.” He says proudly, the smirk very evident in his tone of voice.
I hear someone rush forward and shuffling of paper. They’re checking the list of names of who crossed and didn’t.
”Everyones already crossed the parapet, we have all our candidates General.” The same familiar voice calls out.
The General turns his head and motions me forward. The entourage around me steps aside to let me pass. I hear a few gasps as those closest can see who I am. I don’t dare turn my head to see who they are.
”Trust me, you’ll be wanting this one Wingleader.”
As I step around General Melgren I finally see the face the familiar voice belongs to. It might have been 5 years but there is no denying who stands atop of the stairs at the rotunda. He’s bigger and taller than I remember. But there’s no denying its him. My brother. Xaden Riorson.
Part 2
I do not like Professor Markham and General Melgren. Every time they’re mentioned, I get instantly suspicious. I can’t put my finger on it, but I just don’t trust them.