oh. my. gauwd. BESTIE??
off topic for a quick sec but i recently read fifty shades for the first time (i watched the movie back in high school) to see if it was freaky as mass media was making it out to be…
fifty shades deadass is vanilla compared to the captain’s reward—not only did it match my freak, bestie, it SURPASSED 💀 anastasia “i cry after less than 10 spanks” steele could never last a day in reader’s shoes
ANYWAYS i digress
what did i think of steve’s proposal? fuckass proposal but hey let’s give him some credit by giving it more thought rather than having chatgpt write it for him 😭
THIS QUESTION omg i’ve been laying in bed staring at the ceiling deadass for a good 15 minutes just to ponder this… so like, we all get that steve is clearly possessive over reader—like it’s as clear as climate change at this point HOWEVER i feel like after that encounter with bucky and ESPECIALLY at the end when reader in her sluggish drugged state gushing over bucky, i think it’ll definitely make steve more insatiable than he already is (so the insatiable in him goes from like 101% to 199% these are definitely legitimate percentages i take no srgument on this) so on top of her kisses and cries, it’s only when reader meets bucky (at least based on my memory) that steve actually witnesses her smiling and not being miserable for the first time—does this mean that he’ll go soft for reader? my money’s on him trying to force the same laugh from her simply because she’s “his property” and that means that only he gets access to anything that could ever come out from reader 😔 right now, if anyone were to ask him, he’d refuse to admit that he’d willingly go soft for reader without an ulterior motive (but then again he’s also a guy that doesn’t really need to do the ulterior motive thing around reader since, in his mind, reader should be submissive to his every word to begin with) anywho, i definitely can picture a moment between reader and steve where he ends up flubbing something up unintentionally which makes reader giggle a bit, but then he stares back at her, she remembers that he’s the devil personified and then shuts herself up unless she’s willing to get railed close to death again, which in turn makes steve simutaneously frustrated and upset because how the fuck can bucky make reader smile and giggle without trying but steve can’t get those same reactions? she’s his property after all?? tf??? in the end, it’s not really about steve wanting reader’s affection let alone love but the fact that any and all her emotions and actions belong to him—after all, exploiting his image and taking advantage of his power is all steve’s pretty much ever known, it’s gonna take quite a while for reader to break through all that and have him going soft for her (if it ever happens, that is)
oh steve’s deifnitely planning bucky’s murder as we speak that’s as clear as musk’s n*zi salute
anyways those are my takes on the questions, but i just wanna bring up some things
TONY MF STARK like as soon as he is on steve’s bs like it all just CLICKS like—i remember reading the first part about tony drowning in alcohol cuz of the darkness of the job, only to find out that darkness IS steve oooh the plot is PLOTTING i see your game queen 😭
the PARENTS?? geez if i never read a more fucked up version of beauty and the beast (yunno in the sense that they gave their child away to a guy but instead out of fear it’s because of steve’s charm, and only reader is subject to his ugliness 😶)
and PEGGY—damn like i never really cared about her but she done fucked steve up (or maybe she didn’t but steve’s just so traditionally misogynist)
amazing work as always, besite, keep it tf up 🥹<3
AHHHH bestie firstly thank you so much for always supporting my writing! Truly you don’t realise how much youre valued and how great you are! 🥺🥺🙌🏼🙌🏼🥹🥹✨✨
Also LMAO I remember reading fifty shades when I was 12/13 and even back then I’d read spicier fanfiction 😭💀 but it wasn’t the vanilla-ness of fifty shades that offended me it was more like how badly it was written that even 12 year old me was able to detect it 😂
BUT ANYWAYS, thank you so much for leaving such a wonderful review! And OK so Steve didn’t have ChatGPT write his proposal, but 1000% one of his PR people wrote it for him 😭 like he did NOT write that himself!
And also yes exactly. Spot on. STEVE wants to be the reason she has stars in her eyes. Not out of niceness but because she’s his and so her source of anything (happiness, excitement etc) should solely be HIM. And definitely not another man. Steve’s ego just won’t allow it. But it’ll be interesting to see if this just makes him more awful and barbaric or if he perhaps changes tack and subconsciously tries to win her approval (in his own egotistical, maniacal, meathead way of course)
And yep haha, Steve would make Bucky’s murder look like an accident. But would he go that far? Or would he rather just focus on reader and somehow make her forget about Bucky? Idk…
I really enjoyed writing Tony Stark! I don’t even like the character much but he’ll be a funny foil for Steve. I mean Steve doesn’t even see Tony as competition in any way or form. But just how much does Tony know about Steve’s dark “habits”? 🤔
The parents of reader I think are just super innocent and huge fans is Steve. They just can’t imagine his intentions would be anything less than pure. So they trust him 🥺 and LMFAO Peggy really did a number on Steve, you’re right. Or is Steve just an unreliable narrator? Who knows haha.








