oh boy this takes me back to my middle school days. First of all, don’t draw on lined paper. If you’re doing so because of convenience, get in the habit of carrying a small sketch book around (I usually carry 2 lol). If you’re doing so because the lines help you proportion things out, STOP. I used to do the same thing but with graph paper, and all it is is a crutch that will stop you from improving, and pre-drawn lines also tend to make your drawings look more stilted as well. As for the anatomy, it’s pretty bad. The head is way too big for the body and lacks shape (chin, cheekbones, etc). The nose is too small and pointy and should be moved more to the right. The eyes are WAY too big and too far apart, and I can see the eyebrows and one of the eyes floating on top of the hair. The clothing is lacking folds and there is zero shading, which looks especially weird around the boobs, considering they’re pretty big and yet not casting a shadow. Idk what you were trying to do with the pencil on her but it isn’t really working, and it looks like you’re using mechanical pencil to color it in with is super hard to do and never looks good. The random scribbles for the background are unnecessary. You’ve got a ways to go, but with practice you can get there. I recommend learning the basics of drawing realistically before you start stylizing your work with big eyes or small noses or the like. Learning the proportions will help you when you do start to break them for stylization, as it will help you to know how to stylize so it look unrealistic but nice vs unrealistic and bad. I would post this as bad art.
