#thanks anon

[goldensunset]

Why are you calculator posting

going through my sho minamimoto tag. looking for another calculator post, one that i sadly do not believe i have tagged….

[the1975-10]

They weren’t empty. They were quite thick, actually. Filled with lines of memories, retreats, and so much love, care, and tenderness. They were simply concealed within the unspoiled confines of the white envelopes.

I like the “they weren’t” then “they were”, and how you use the fact that they’re white envelopes as a symbol

(I’m going to keep going because I don’t think I’ll be allowed to send that many anons(

The small flecks of sand it had gathered on its soft mane scratched Paige’s bare chest, just below her bikini top, but she paid it no mind, instead revelling in how the unicorn was making its presence known.

Just wow. The symbol of the unicorn here and you emphasizing its importance in her life. And the british spelling of revelling is funny

“No, Mommy. I-” Paige heard the edges of his words shake, and her breath caught in her chest, pain severing its weak bondages to break free and claw its way into her heart again. “I really miss her.”

I have no words, this is the most beautiful line yet. It again captures that overwhelming pain Paige is feeling, describing it in such intense ways

“What if she doesn’t like it?” The words were so, so quiet. They came out mumbled, in the hideous fashion where shame intruded on the scene, her voice fragile in the way she’d inherited from Paige.

Oh my god. I absolutely love the description of the shame being hideous, and the way she inheritaed it from Paige, who hides her grief and is clearly breaking down on the inside

Paige’s lips were bleeding by the time they made it to the parking lot, chewed so raw that it hurt to run her tongue over their cracked, uneven surfaces.

This is so vivid and it once again characterizes that pain as something physical that Paige feels

And an honorable mention:

…Paige laughed again, warmth spilling into her empty chest despite the piercing cold invading through her palms.

The contrast here is beautiful

I really like your writing in general, but this one was written so well I just had to send this. Keep writing, it’s very good

Wow this is dedication lol i like that you picked it apart like this!!!

I'm glad the symbolism makes senseeee

and that Paige's pain is characterized in a way that's easy to understand!

Thanks for all the compliments, anon! I really appreciate it. This was really sweet of you to write out :))

I really appreciate you choosing to break down this fic specifically! I also really like how I wrote it, and even tho i don't necessarily take pride in my work, I feel like this is some of my best writing so far lol

[goldensunset]

Well, it looks like KH4 Strelitzia _does_ have black boots as well as black socks, so, sorry for annually ribbing you about you thinking she had black boots all this time. Turns out you can tell the future!

PFFFFFT back then it was bc my art skills were so underleveled that shoes and socks and feet were all as one to me like uhhh vague foot shaped thing at the end of the leg. i haven’t drawn her kh4 design enough times for it to be a problem and one could handwave it as being my artstyle to be simplistic with shoes anyway but yeah i did in fact not take into consideration that if sora had bare feet inside then surely that meant streli had taken off her shoes too. but more importantly i was like well they have given us nothing to work with in the shoe department so i’m gonna go entirely based off what i can see. but REALLY i knew she’d have solid black shoes cuz that’s nomura’s current character design style. still can’t tell if she has boots or just like flats or something but idc

[e-spell-worse]

ill be there

Thang anon

[politicsoflove]

2, 11, 22

2. in an emergency, who would you call? A. My brother or my mum most likely. Depending on the situation. 11. song you listened to in childhood? A. Angels by Robbie Williams (bonus songs - War Pigs by Black Sabbath as my dad listened to it a lot, The Lady in Red by Chris De Burgh was played at home often too) 22. Favourite time of day/night? A. Probably sunrise or sunset. Around golden hour when everything looks pretty. But I do also like the stillness that comes with night time.

[goldensunset]

I support you and your stolen-original posts. Never let them know your next move

Every post on this Site is Mine

[goldensunset]

Okay but

New strelitzia scenessss

*weeps* i know my girl awesome but i’m also kairipilled…

[politicsoflove]

8

Favourite accessory you own?

The most used/worn is probably my spinny fidget ring. I also like my watches, and my alpaka bag.

Oh and my glasses. I guess most worn accessory is my glasses as they are always on my face.