Alright Hobbit & LOTR writer friends, I need some help.
I'm trying to figure out some dwarven alternatives for phrase that typical are written with the words 'man' or 'men'. These are coming from Thorin's perspective and I don't think he would refer to his Company like a commander says, "His men" since the race of Men are a separate entity to Dwarves and Dwarf-men. Plus, Thorin has a dislike for the race of Men, so I don't think he would equate his dwarven companions to men.
Examples from Thorin's perspective that need changed:
His men protested loudly.
If you were one of my men, I'd...
The men around the table laughed riotously.
Gentlemen (is Gentlefolk alright? Gentlepeople? Gentledwarves?)
The hardest part is when there aren't just dwarves in the scene (Bilbo and Gandalf or even some Elves) so I can't always say 'the dwarves'.
Any suggestions or thoughts on the matter would be really appreciated! Thank you!
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