Jun 15
first drafts are really bad sometimes. I'm reading through my dialogue tags and i get this absolute literature. So good. Wow Nina. I guess i know what you were going for in this scene
#There's some awkward silence#and he coughs#awkwardly#poetry#thanks so much for that description past nina#yeah i bet it was awkward#Girl#UUgh#Another one was “i drink my drink or something (?)”#why do i want to keep this in#It's kind of ... Giving#(it's giving awkward)#But you know#I have to actually think of how to show how awkward it is now.#:(#ShOW NoT TELL - Well what if it's awkward though and i really need them to know how awkward it is#Tell you what is awkward - the amount of tags i have on this#ALso it really hated the word misphrased - is that a word ? Word says no#false friends#They are cruel to me#Yeah that's defo not how you spell that#Ok well we learning#I keep looking at it and i'm like yep you're right again word document#you're right again...