I LOVE FUNNY YAOII !!
Iām still part way through but this is peak comedy and when I tell you the double romance interest has me like this: š
Hits all my favorite freaky dynamics š«Ŗš«Ŗš«Ŗ
sauce: The Beast of Bahal Never Misses Its Prey
excuse me what
as yāalls yaoi connoisseur I have to tell u guys my honest thoughts
So fully until halfway through it was great and funny and it had a lot of potential, the characters felt layered and comedic but at some point the pacing started to feel off
There were big drops of lore or information that were condensed in a chapter or two about various characters. I think I got a general grasp of the plot but it seemed (based on comments) that it was generally hard to follow for a lot of people.
There were also choices made about the plot and the characters that I didnāt like, particularly because they didnāt feel organic or that they made sense. Certain personality traits, flags and incidents were not properly addressed and not enough of a relationship between the leads was established for the end to feel like a fulfilling payoff. We had more chemistry with one guy over the actual guy.
For the art (and character designs) this is absolutely a 10/10 but plot wise this honestly falls into a 6/10.
I gotta warn yāall now this is not a polyam relationship or a love triangle really, I think the ambiguity of this three-fold relationship is precisely one of the core elements that fell apart
