#15minutecitypresentation

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Presentation Slides edited 

I changed some of the slides as previously I had 6 pages, when we were asked to have 3-4 for the final submission

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Final presentation slides 

I mainly tried to focus on the legibility of my brand when I was working on the logo and the additional assets I wanted to include in the presentation. I think it looks more professional and considered now.

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15 minute city presentation crit

Notes:

- work on legibility

- set clearer parameters for the logo

- the blue marker connects the letters f and e, see how this can be fixed

- make the bottom line go around the logo, it will give it more movement and liveliness

- sometimes only one colour can be used as a logo background

- consider creating a journey by naming the frames, e.g., Frame A, Frame B, etc.

- play with the shapes of the letters on the map, add movement.

- study the maps more, on my map it is not clear where the streets are

- The landmarks are too complicated

- add more contrast to the map by creating rigid shapes and dull colours and then adding icons to the map

- work on the legibility of my poster; try "artwork around the corner" because the "frame" will confuse those who know nothing about my project.

This critique was very useful as it pointed out the areas that need development and gave me a clearer idea of how I can take my branding further.  

[antonyad2]

15 minute city presentation