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writing tip #3883:

draft zero? more like draft HERO am i right ladies

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AG: Man! I can't 8elieve I let her trick me like that. Such an amateur mistake.

You think she tricked you? My take on the Scourge Sisters' final confrontation was pretty straightforward, and doesn't really gel with what Vriska's saying.

It looked to me like Terezi was not-so-subtly telling Vriska that she was threatening to kill her, Vriska called her bluff, and Terezi proved she wasn’t bluffing. No tricks, just psychology.

Even though Scratch calls it a 'ruse', I’m having trouble understanding where the trick comes into it. It’s not like Terezi tricked Vriska into turning her back on their confrontation – Vriska knew what might happen, as Terezi didn’t hide the fact that she was considering murder.

AG: Do you have any recollection at all of the last message I sent you 8efore I died? GT: i don't even know who you are!!! AG: Yeah, I figured. Just as well. I made some pretty em8arrassing confessions to you. […] AG: I asked you if you wanted to…….. AG: You know. AG: Hang out.

Sorry Vriska, but it appears you've dialed into the wrong timeframe - and I don't know whether that's a blessing or a curse.

GT: oh god, this is so ridiculous. you are just a crazy troll on the internet, and i need to get back to packing up this present for my friend! we are not going to hang out, i'm sorry. AG: John, there is no present! You are not in your hive, and you don't have anything to send. She received it a long time ago. None of this matters anymore.

“Oh my f8cking god, John! Just remem8er the plot so we can d8 already!”

AG: If you don't 8elieve me, you are free to look out your window.

And now we’re getting some session memories. John’s beginning to recall his dream self’s repressed scrawlings, as well as Terezi’s infamous ‘map’ of LOWAS.

"Now, the last time I surprised someone at their hive, I’ll admit it didn't turn out gr8.” “huh?” “Don’t worry a8out it!!!!!!!!”

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"Oh yeah, those will be fun"...

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Castelluccio si chiude nel silenzio dorato del tramonto, e il mondo sembra fermarsi a guardare.

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