Dec 10, 2019
editing/finishing scenes like: how do i make it clear that my MC is actually invested and attracted to these people and not just being manipulated into liking them
#hannah writes a novel#this is the issue with mind-controlling vampires#things get complicated#and consent gets... weird#which is why she initiates everything and i flag compulsion with negative experiences#no headache? no compulsion. she's doing stuff completely on her own.#it also helps that it's a close third so you get a lot of her thoughts