#blackfallsrp

[celestialslays]

blackfallsrp?

No complaints on the url. I really like the theme you used. I don't think I've ever seen it used on an rp before? Rphs all the time, but for an rp main I'm not sure. I feel like the background is a tad bit too dark compared to the sidebars. I'd maybe change it to something lighter. I have no complaints about the sidebar graphics, they look pretty nice. Your setting is original but your plot isnt. Sorry hun, I've seen it several times. This is just another small town rp. I suggest adding a twist, otherwise you'll drown in the tags along with the rest of the boring town rps. Your fcs are okay, but overused. I suggest adding some underused into the mix. The labels are so overused I can't even.. I'm tired of seeing Lily Collins being innocent and Barbara being a slut. 

[noveltalks]

blackfallsrp?

Everything's so bright. The gradient is okay, but super bright, and also super pink. The graphics itself is okay, though I think a variety of faceclaims would be better than just Perrie, ja feel? It might just be because my eyes are weak and it's 5 am but I think you should go with a slightly darker gradient so it's easier on the eyes. Also maybe make the description text and post colour darker, the white just stands out quite a lot and again, not too easy on the eyes. They have Emma Watson as their mascot, and if you know me you'll know that she is literally my Jesus, so I'm conflicted as to whether I feel proud to see someone else using her face or just weirdly possessive over the fact that someone is using her. Anyways, wow I got sidetracked but onto the plot; okay so the plot was pretty short and sweet? Nothing new, nothing original, nothing to say. 

It's not gonna be a rec from me, sorry.

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