⇢ FIRST LOOK REVIEW for the one and only, darkdescentrpg
Everything stated below is constructive and in no way whatsoever personal. If you’ve got further questions, concerns or comments on what I had to say, don’t be afraid to hit me up, so we can figure it out. I’d appreciate a like to confirm that you’ve seen the review. You may now proceed down below.
001 MAIN PAGE, THEME & URL:
I remember reviewing your group awhile back when the page looked very different from what it is now, but I’m glad to say that I'm not disappointed - the page were and still is stunning, despite the header-to-sidebar transformation, which is a nice touch but takes some time getting used to. I adore the color scheme you’ve gone with, everything is visible yet not hard on the eyes. The page is not the least cluttered - thank you for opting for a signature rather than GIFs - and the URL is on point. Entering your page is an altogether pleasant experience - well done!
As far as I can see, you haven’t made many (if any) changes to the plot, so I’ll just do a quick copy-paste from my previous review as all of it is still very much applicable - hope you don’t mind. — First of all, amazing job at putting together an informative guide for those of us who have not had a chance to read the book series. Not many fandom-based roleplays do that, but you’ve got literally everything covered and clear. As for the plot itself, it’s nicely put together. The sequence of the events is logical and the sentence construction as well as the choice of words makes it easy to understand and follow. I haven’t seen a lot of TMI roleplays so I might be a bit off my game, especially as I’ve only read the first book of the series so far, but to me, at least, the plot also comes off as original, not to mention interesting.
As I said once before - I absolutely love your choice of faceclaims. You’ve got tons of characters and as far as I can see, a great representation of ethnicities, body types and genders.
Beautiful! The whole package looks great - the header, sidebar, bio graphics et cetera. There’s just enough going on, and they definitely add a lot to the aesthetics of the roleplay. I especially like the moving details - they work, yet they’re subtle.
When reviewing groups, I usually try to not only bring out the good, but also offer my opinion and objective criticism, but in this case, I feel like I’ve got nothing but compliments. It seems I’m forced to end the review as I started it - entering your page was a truly pleasant experience. Thank you. The group will definitely find it’s way back to my recommended groups list. I wish you the best of luck — you’ve worked really hard and it shows!