#dispatch beta reader

[ikiracake]

For the record, I am trying to write THIS Flambert Time Travel AU, if anyone is still interested in actually reading it. That being said, it's turning into a bit of a monster, and I could really use the help of a beta 😅

So yeah, if anyone would like to help me out, pls let me know, I would really appreciate it! More details about the fic under the cut if you'd like to know more!

The story is already at 58k words and Shroud hasn't even escaped yet, so it's...it's gonna be big, yeah. Also I plan to do a sex scene at the end, so pls no minors. The fic contains a lot of swearing (thanks Flambae) but I don't think there's anything else super concerning about it? Please feel free to ask me for more information if you want to check for specific subjects, though!

At this point I mostly need help with flow (are parts of the story dragging on too long and getting kind of boring?) and characterization (is this a He Would Not Fucking Say That moment or does this sound kind of believable?). I just want to make sure I haven't poured all this time and energy into something that kinda sucks, you know? 🥲

Pls help me, y'all. I need it so bad