#felune

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A lion photographed by Margot Raggett in Ruaha National Park in Tanzania.

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i LOVE that last sentence omfggg

aaaaaaa ty......!! i love writing descriptions of how people are talking honestly but mostly i do it when im describing how r talks when he's drunk oops

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"Mm," he replies, casting his eyes down. "I'm okay."

Ey presses eir lips together tightly, considering eir response carefully. "Are you sure?" ey asks after a moment of deliberation. 

Grantaire looks up again, nodding quickly. "That is to say," he says, "things are different; meetings in your absence are strange, though Combeferre's temporary leadership is no less competent, in the technical sense, of course."

"That's because he already does half of my job," ey says.

"But of course!" he agrees. "And I should hardly dare to say that he's done a poor job picking up the slack in your absence, the furthest from it, we're all very impressed, even if he does lack some of your sway."

"But you've been going to the meetings," ey points out, smiling.

He rolls his eyes and gives em a look as if this should never have been in question. Ey bites eir tongue on a sharp response to it. "Of course I have," he says. "But it isn't the same. And furthermore I should add that it's very tempting to misbehave when there's no one around to scold me."

Ey raises an eyebrow at this and says, "I could assign that task to Combeferre, too, if you'd prefer."

He only grins. 

Enjolras takes a sip of eir coffee and grimaces. "What I wouldn't do for a real cup of coffee," ey adds. At this Grantaire sucks a sharp breath through his teeth, glancing wide-eyed off to the side of the room. "What?" ey asks, frowning at him.

"Nothing," he says, shaking his head rapidly. "I don't know what you mean."

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"Hey," Grantaire replies, and a crooked grin spreads slowly across his face. "It's, um - good to see you."

"Same to you," ey says. "Though you look like a mess."

He scoffs. "Oh, thanks," he says, but there's no bite in it. His eyes are fixed on the screen, which gives the odd impression that he's looking more at eir chest than at eir face, though ey knows it's not the case. "You, on the other hand," he adds, "look perfect, as usual."

"Shut up," ey tells him, laughing. 

"What?" He's grinning more broadly now. "It's true! Gorgeous as ever - no, more."

Ey rolls eir eyes, though it does nothing to hide the smile ey can feel tugging at the edges of eir mouth in spite of emself. "I know that isn't true," ey says, "since at least three people today have seen fit to tell me how tired I look. And I don't care for flattery."

He laughs at that and shakes his head, though at what ey can't be sure. A beat passes, Grantaire smiling, Enjolras watching him, and then he says very softly, "Miss you."

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felune replied to your post:Enjolras hears voices in the hall, and looks up in...

ooooo i love how you write interaction … i love how youve shown enjolras being cagey and tense and ohh my gosh i love your little turns of phrase??? for a given definition of fine…. its just so ?? good… i love your writing

thank you omg....!!! thank you i really like that bit and im so glad em being rly tense about it comes thru................ thank you............

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the atmosphere of this section is so… effective like its very tense, you write high emotion scenes really well… aa i love this its something about the really little actions (specifically the toe of eir shoes, describing the small things) Loves It

;___; thank you so much aaaaaah

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felune replied to your post:"Now, both of you hold still," he says, giving the...

this is such a cute snapshot (pun partially intended heh) of a situation!! i dont know these characters v well but they flow really well and seem really natural together aa the little descriptions of actions are sooo cute and so well done! *___*

oooomg thank u..... this is such a sweet compliment omg

my favorite part is cosette scrunching up her skirt when she laughs probably i love that... and the bit about jvj's smile

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felune replied to your post:felune replied to your post: what are ur guys’...

yes… cool names often spring up when theres mystery surrounding the person… it would also be interesting if it became like a condescending thing when she gets captured? “the infamous captain redsky! weve heard so much about you” etc….

ohhhhhhh omg i like this too!! like the name comes from her dawn attacks but she takes it up after the navy captures her hmmmmmmmmm. need to do lots of character building with miss redsky