//DRIVING TEST; Honestly I really love where you're taking Neville mentally with the major changes he's had in his personality and his struggle trying to balance who he once was with the person he believes he has to become to stay relevant/keep the title. One thing I'd probably nitpick on is his dialogue, since it sounds a bit stiff sometimes (this may have been intentional on your end) but otherwise, he's aces 👌🏻
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Not exactly sure what you mean by “stiff” on his dialogue but it may be a cross between an american mun listening to audiobooks with a lot of british authors and / or narrators...
but yes~<3 thank you. i was cheering for his heel turn then i realized “omg, now i have to work this in qAq!” and yes, you’re right, he’s struggling with the balance and knows he’s probably going to struggle with both it and dealing with those on the outside that dislike him (and he’s confused why~<3)
