When I finally had access to the balcony to put everything in place, I felt like I wanted to add more. However, I also felt the clean simplicity of it was very relaxing. Plus, the small details inside the jars might disappear if there is too much going on around them. I remembered the initial discussion with Professor Furlong about having some jars sitting around the installation and lamented not having collected more objects and jars! With rainy season beginning, the decision was ultimately made for me! I had just one day to photograph it in the sun, so I just went ahead and did it.
Originally, I had wanted to be able to stand inside of the mobile. I considered building some “branches” off the base to create a bigger space between the hanging jars. The space between the big metal pipe and the divider wall wasn’t quite enough, though, so I felt limited there. I noticed that I kept feeling limited, having to reevaluate what was possible for me to do. That seems fitting given the concept of the piece! My life is going to change with the arrival of the baby, and I’ll probably feel limited and a little trapped at first… or for a while.
In the group critique, I got some really good suggestions from my classmates and professor. Several of them were related to building and expanding the environment more around the balcony. If I were to do that, I’d like to bring the installation around behind the chair rather than in front of it. I don’t want to clog up the view from the balcony, but surrounding the chair from behind with more “beach” could create more of a feeling of really being inside the installation. One classmate pointed out that the sea glass chimes got a little lost inside the jars. If I were able to bring them out of the mobile and around the chair, perhaps their sounds would be better heard and they could be admired separately from the mobile. I especially liked the suggestion of having one jar that was interactive and touchable rather than just observable. If I could find a jar that fit in the cup holder on the chair, visitors to the installation could take the top off and play with the contents of that jar.
Moving forward, I think I’d like to spend more time in the experimenting stage than in the ideation stage. I lost some time trying to plan things when there were so many unknowns (like, Would I even be able to use the space I intended to use?). I should have made many different things so that, when I did have access to the space, I had more to work with. I was a little conservative in my creating, because I worried about making something that would be ultimately unusable. Perhaps if I had branched out from my plan, I could have come across something spectacular for the piece.