#jbalpha

[emmelineburnett]

~6 have found a lost treasure.

Hayden looked up a bit surprised, "Hello." She greeted. "I'm Hayden. Who might you be?"

[imprintedmemorycard]

Jake

I want a date night. Can we do dinner a d a movie tonight? Like the macaroni grill and iron man 3? I promise I'll eat human food tonight.

[ofhumanshield]

To Move On ( Jake)

Bella had been home now from having felt that she was lost with out Edward for about 2 weeks now. Having not come out and shut herself out from the outside world. Simple things she would cry because they reminded her of Edward. Even the nightmares of him getting hurt. Or them not being together and her being injured or killed. Each night she would wake up and think he was here with her.  But when she fully woke up, she realized he was gone still. Charlie had called Billy to see if Jacob could get Bella out of her room to help her start to get over Edward Cullen. It shouldn't be this hard to get over a boy. Espically only one you met for a year and a half ago. Of course he didn't know all that went on over the year and a half. The dangers, everything.  Charlie opened the door for Jacob, "Thanks for coming Jake"he said letting him in.  "She's upstairs...She had another nightmare last night. This time worse than the last. Something about a vampire after her again ...Its strange...I am thinking about shipping her back to her mothers. If she keeps like this. "He paused depressed"Maybe you can snap her out of this phase. "He said as he was tired and worn from this.

Always watching and staying up at night was affecting his job and his ability to do his job well.  "I am going to get some rest, if only for a little ...Call me if you need anything "he said as he went to the living room to go back to watch the game,eventually hopefully to fall back asleep. 

[imprintedmemorycard]

Rant.

Since you're so keen on correcting his errors, let me "help you" and correct yours. 

This is what you sent Jake. 

Some tips for the mun.. You don’t say “a sex” you just say “sex” okay then don’t use the word blouse.. It’s too formal use shirt instead. Growls? Please looks up that word in the dictionary and please use the thesaurus to find some other words to use. You have to also use the word “because” not “coz” it makes your rp better. Also, when putting the . , ? ! ” do not leave a space before it like this. No Space between the word and the period :) happy role playing . 

  (How much ruder could you have possibly been?)

  So let me break this down line by line. 

  Some tips for the mun...you*

  ..."sex." Okay?*

  Then don't use the word 'blouse,' it's too formal. Use the word 'shirt' instead.*

  'Growls?'*

  Please look that word up in the dictionary, and use a thesaurus to find some other words to use.*

  You also should use the word 'because,' not 'coz.' It makes your rp better.*

  Also when using punctuation or quotation marks, don't leave a space between the last word of the sentence and the punctuation mark or quotation. There is no space between that word and the punctuation mark that you are using.*

(Punctuation is the correct term for the marks ". , ! ?," and quotation marks is the correct term for the "' and "," since you are getting all technical.)

  Happy roleplaying.*

    So before you go and throw stones, you might want to move out of your glass house. Especially since you made the same mistake on punctuation that you corrected him for three times. 

  Oh, and by the way. When you're writing English, your whole message is this thing we call a run on sentence. You should really watch that to make your writing better. 

  Happy breathing. :)

[imprintedmemorycard]

ooc

I owe. I know I do. And as soon as I finish these two exams, I swear I will. 

[imprintedmemorycard]

Lost Little Girl

Nessie smiled leading the girl into Jake's house and nodded. "You sure can. What kind of jelly do you like?" She looked around. "Jake? Are you here?" She smiled to the girl and led her to the table and pulled a chair out for her. "Sit here while I make your sandwich."

[imprintedmemorycard]

Jake is so cute when he sleeps

-crawls into bed next to him, gently kissing his neck-