hi shan! i'm trying to polish up before opening day and i would really appreciate it if you could share your opinion/let me know what could be improved? thank you!
of course , love ! first of all , your theme is so lovely ! it’s not overworked or overdone , which is really pleasing to the eye & i like it a lot ! moving on to your plot , it’s written really well ! at first i thought it was going to be your typical ‘murder mystery’ sort of plots but reading through it’s actually quite the opposite , which i love because it sways away from what people normally do ! it’s easy to follow & i’m really vibing from it ! one thing i love about rps is organisation , & yours seems incredibly organised which is always easier for potential applicants because they don’t have to search high & low for a page ! however five days of inactivity seems a little long , so i would suggest shortening it a little ! another thing i’d suggest doing is adding a link to a mobile navigation in your description , just to make it easier for those on mobile ! overall though , this looks like such a sweet rp & i wish you the best of luck !
