#luvlyriki

[angeliqqi]

of course,

even changjo can’t handle that keenkey part

[angeliqqi]

Yo dude! Descendants of the Airport = DOTA. I think that's why they name it like that beside perhaps they want to parody Descendants of The Sun in airport version lol

dude ;;; that is such a lame acronymanywho i’m just here waiting for comeback like ………………………………..mold has developed on me because waiting for teen top comeback.

[angeliqqi]

winkeu winkeu

@luvlyriki imagine he got the scented candle to prepare for a private show for you........

[angeliqqi]

lr dude thank you so much for bombing my ask box it’s the best feeling

holding the comment is actually not good. Comments or responds is what motivate the writer.

/nods seriously you have realised the truth/

thank you so much for your comment. thoughtful comments always motivate me /i’m crying/:(((((

dude funny how you said you learn vocab from my stories :))))) i’m so glad. yes.

First of All… Let me spazzing over Chanhee in his 30s like for 1 hour… The best DADDY ever..

(1 hour later)

Done.

---- YES AMEN isn’t sugardaddy chanhee the best.

DUDE YOU DON’T KNOW HOW PLEASED I AM WITH THE “STRIP” AT THE BEGINNING.

when the idea sparked in my head i cried a few hours straight. i’m so blessed.

also you don’t know how to count but i love you anyway.

3. The department moment Dude. I like that part. I imagine that part soooo well that i giggled and feeling embarrased like i see it real. A friendship like this touched my heart, remind me of my close friend :”)

:) i’m glad :) it’s the best isn’t it? i’m so glad you have such a close friend!!!!

You make our man as the best of the best man here.

---- i also made him a stripper YOU’RE WELCOME. 

this kind of… composure jonghyun fit the story and to be paired with a 30 y.o. Chanhee. I know he was so cutie shy fluffy ball back there.. in a debut era

------YES. THis dynamic. i love. i’m so glad you see it.

3. Chanhee. When you describe him

 --- your comment got cut off!

[angeliqqi]

Finally The Commentary after Ageeees

*after sighing several (hundred) times *going to bathroom  *rethinking what it shouldn’t be *too much low self esteem *too busy *too tired to type a single word

What makes me so slow to send the comments is.. i want to give comment as good as you make the story. But Reality is.. i don’t have that extra time like before. Because writing is taking a lot of energy from me. Though I like it, I love it.

So i learned that keeping, holding the comment is actually not good. Comments or responds is what motivate the writer. sO I’M SORRY FOR KEEPING IT SO LONG and it’s not getting any better if i can be honest haha *sobs :“D

so my dear angeliqqi, please have this raw ugly comment of mind.

I hope it still motivate you to write more in the future :))))

oh wait, fyi this comment is last updated on august 23th. I supposed to write the chapter 2 also, but then you split it to 3 chapters so i’ll comment that LATER as i saw a whole story and thaaat would be on ask box instead, suddenly and randomly. Bcz i dont want to make u wait anymore XD

One important thing, From your stories i learn new vocabularies, the meaning,, what it use for.. and that’s make me happy when i learn new words from your stories. You should happy about that ;))

So here it is~~~~

First of All… Let me spazzing over Chanhee in his 30s like for 1 hour… The best DADDY ever..

(1 hour later)

Done.

Sorry for supeer late reply Dude. I don’t want to ruin it (though it seems i’m about to).

So where do we start? Story or characters?

Let start from the story. (why do i look like an editor or somewhat expert in writing when my english not that good XDDD)

1. “Strip” i took a deep breath couldn’t believe that it alr started, i read too quick i didn’t  realise changhyun name and straight to think ‘dude, are u gonna make this three?’ but then i got my sense back and re-read t slowly. An interesting start if i could say ;))))

2. I see go minsoo – dongyeol’s potential here.. if this were manga It could have a spin-off :3

3. Hiring Bang Minsoo and Lee Sungjun as professionals? More like asking for help…

4.

5. Daddy and Baby first meeting.

3. The department moment Dude. I like that part. I imagine that part soooo well that i giggled and feeling embarrased like i see it real. A friendship like this touched my heart, remind me of my close friend :”)

Characters

1. You make our man as the best of the best man here. He care jonghyun a lot, he’s full of responsibilities to the point of worrying A LOT. Also he’s calculating well the jacket’s price and the aprtment rent. He is full of responsibility that confused in sugar dating arrangement or marriage one. Even photoshopped looked-face can be an issue. But that’s the point of his amusing character here. Well best of the best friend type.

2. Jonghyun’s character seems so calm and thoughtful here. Idk if it’s ur plan since you  make him dealing with poverty here. I thought he will throw something or kicking the bed when he was fired from the coffe shop XD. But this kind of… composure jonghyun fit the story and to be paired with a 30 y.o. Chanhee. I know he was so cutie shy fluffy ball back there.. in a debut era

3. Chanhee. When you describe him

[angeliqqi]

You are telling too many realities dude i can't. Especially when you brought parents and work's part up. And just info, changrick is being no. 12 in most 40 OTPs in Kpop. Because of their real friendship. They rank higher than chunjoe. And N.A.P is not the list which surprised me. Still there's no upten OTP yet, but if they see all members.. well i see.. all members done soooo many fanservices like nothing's wrong. And this xiao kid,. i can't. How can he so.. provocative in his 18 #mefainted

dude ;; yeah the characters are in an ecosystem yknow. the more detailed we go into this ecosystem the longer the fic is. the trick is to know where to stop…ie, when there’s just enough info while it does not leave too many questions for readers.

where do you go to read these strange lists you do.

i am not surprised with changrick. ricky is a good friend :) nap is not on the same level with chunjoe and changrick. 

dude idc he’s 18 or not i write all the aus and give him all the ages i want :)

[angeliqqi]

Dude, i'm crying last night and i can't sleep well. The ending is so heart breaking. But then it was too good to just be a fic. It's so real. I fel like watching someone's life. Now i know why this title is RAINBOW'S END. After the rainbow's end, there'll be sun shine. But then you still miss the beautiful of rainbow. I think my commentary will be useless now lol. But idc, i will still give you the raw one b4 i read the ending. Really dude, your writing improved a lot in term of telling reality

dude ;; so good to hear from you. i’m so glad you liked :(( it’s first and foremost my gift for you.

did you think the ending is heartbreaking? and it’s real too? :(((((( dude i’m so glad you felt that way. means i’m doing a nice job.  ;A;

that has been a good interpretation of the title ;A;

give me the raw one haha. i think it’s because your comment writing speed is slower than my fic writing speed :)))))) that’s your fault.

it’s so good to hear that you think i improved ;A;

[angeliqqi]

1. OH SO THAT'S IT! NO WONDER I'M CONFUSED. at first i thought changjo is in military services that also do as bodyguard. i see now. Omo, then does that ending mean niel and jong have met once in their mission? like niel beat jong?; 2. Oh-ho~~ 'savage noona' type huh No Sooil? If yes then he's more twisted than jonghyun, bang minsoo, chanyong and lee changhyun. Seriously TOPMed have liking these kinds. Maybe that's why i stan this ent despite their lacking

topmed has 1. interesting people. 2. GREAT GENUINE LOVE AMONG THE ARTISTS.

no, they haven’t met but they’re about to, and they’re going to be on the same side in this mission so no they’re not going to beat each other.

but like, when they’re in the same side and the other side knows that they’re related then the other side can have tactics like, kidnap one of them and weaken the other.

they’re startled because they saw that they’re both lying.

no wait are you saying that choi jonghyun, bang minsoo, kim chanyong and lee changhyun are all noonas in disguise i’m crying that would be so twisted :)))))))))))))))))))))))