Feb 6, 2022
susie should be in every deltarune fanfic ever. she increases the enjoyment of the author by 120% (note that this is after she demolishes the author and they stay up until like eleven o clock staring blearily at their screen wondering how in the world they're going to make the immenseness of susie deltarune work)
#I LOVE HER#personal#i rewrote the chapter i was talking about here to make it less ooc but#it was really interesting that i put susie with an adult who didn't shut her down and patiently listened to her and also made snarky commen#ts sometimes and then wrote susie talking and being comfortable without even meaning to??#like oh no this is a problem. susie's coming out of her shell and she's being really smart.#and she's pointing out things she's noticed and talking about her friends.#edit because my mind is busying itself: and i KNOW these two are connected because i've written susie with an adult who's not like that bef#ore!#and she was reticent and gruff!
