Claire Tenman (Hakuouki)
Yeah, OK. I know that you said that you won't accept OCs with much information and such, but this one is bad enough that I had to send it to this blog.
Oh dear God...
This is going to be one hell of a review.
Name: Claire Tenman
Really? An English name for an anime that's set in the old age of JAPAN, particularly the BAKUMATSU ERA? Not a wise choice if you ask me.
Nickname(s): Akuma Koneko (Demon Kitten), and Shadō (The Shadow)
THE GOD-DAMN OF AN ABOMINATION OF A NICKNAME.
The only time when a person WILL call someone a DEMON is when they antagonizes them a.k.a LOATHES them. Not some cuddly-wuddly nickname that you use to cuddle with your sugoi-samurai-ikemen-sama.
Age: 19
Birthday: May 19th
Place of Birth: Edo, Japan
Nationality: Japanese and German
Can you explain how the hell did a German family manage to get into Japan as at that timeline in Hakuouki, we BARELY see any foreigners around? Sure in the second season, there WERE Western-like cultures including their clothes HOWEVER, EXPLAIN HOW THIS GIRL IS GERMAN AND HOW THE HELL IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE CONSIDERING JAPAN DURING THE BAKUMATSU ERA?
Species: Half-Demon
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Hair: Black with brown highlights, shoulder-length. When in a ponytail goes down to the middle of her neck
Are you even serious? How the hell can a person in the old era of Japan can have brown highlights in their hair considering how in the show, there's barely characters with highlighted hair nor a character with dyed hair?
Sure there's Kyo and Amagiri, but their hair colour are of a logical-looking shade to look natural, and there's barely highlights in their hairs.
Eyes: Icy Green (Dark Green)
How can DARK GREEN be ICY GREEN?? Those two are different shades of green.
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 125 lbs.
Build: Skinny, but well built and has very developed muscles.
Are you kidding me? With that weight, you would have gained extra pounds right about now BECAUSE MUSCLES CAN GIVE YOU EXTRA WEIGHT NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU DENY AND THAT, MY FOLLOWERS, IS NOT A BAD SIGN. It's a good sign that you have developed muscles.
Tattoos: A simple gold ring around her upper arm
Scars: One on each wrist and one across the front of her neck
Piercing(s): Both ears on the cartilage
Let it be known that the reason why Geishas never worn earrings is because there's no technology or method in Japan that enables them to have ear-holes for them. Hence, this OC having piercings is highly impossible.
Doesn't this sound too much of a self-insert to you?
Clothing: Usually wears a black tank-top with khaki capri's and brown boots.
Yep, shots fired. It's a self-insert.
BECAUSE THERE'S NO KHAKI CAPRI'S IN BAKUMATSU JAPAN AND THERE'S NO WAY A GIRL WOULD GET AWAY USING PANTS IN JAPAN, UNLESS SHE IS DISGUISED CONSIDERING THE ERA HAKUOUKI IS IN.
Appearance: Looks like a boy, always wears her hair back in a ponytail.
Occupation: Warrior
Affiliation(s): The Shinsengumi
Residence: Kyoto, Japan
Parental Figure: A kindly gentleman who lets her stay at his house when she needs to.
Siblings: A twin brother named Kegan
Oh look, even the twin has a foreign, non-Japanese name. *sarcasm* Woo-hoo.
Crush/Lover: TBA
Best friend: Hajime Saito
Friends: Shinpachi Nagakura, Sanosuke Harada, Heisuke Todo, Souji Okita, Susumu Yamazaki, and Toshizo Hijikata
A.K.A she's friends with everyone, isn't she? I wonder why Chizuru's not in there. Hmm...
Enemies: Chikage
Transportation: Her own feet
Carries on him/her: A Katana and one survival knife
Hobbies: Martial Arts and Swordplay
Favorite Food(s): Nothing
Favorite Drink(s): Sake and water
Favorite Color(s): Black, Brown, Dark Green, and Dark Blue
Favorite Place to be: Under a Cherry Blossom Tree
Favorite Thing to do: Relax in the shadows
Theme Song: "I Like You, I Love You" by Kagamine Rin
Quote(s): "It's better to flee and live than to fight and die."
Aaand that ends this review.