Anon That Follows When It Bleeds
Lilitrania on Chapter 2
Bonjour
Phew !!! The asshole died before he could touch her I'm reassured! Ha I'm happy, it's one of the young predator who saved her as well, so that means that ta'roga is going to come and see our little Katherine 🤔.
Anyway 🤣 I hope I'm not crazy telling myself that the predator of the camp, and the same one that the OWLF team were hunting.
In any case great chapter strongly following
KISS of a Frenchwoman
I'm 80% sure you follow me on tumblr, if So you'll see this reply there too! Cus THANK YOU! Yes! You got it! Mostly! Okay ow lemme go and properly reply to you lol.
1. Hi again! I'm glad to see you came back and read more! I really love your reviews because you give good insight for me and i look forward to seeing your name!
2. You're not crazy, not at all! A little off center but almost right! There's TWO hunters on earth right now. 1 is Thwei (the now blooded predator) and 2 is Ta'roga. Lets start with 1, hes in the camp 100% yes, he was hunting, yes, the team only think there's one hunter so technically you are right! But Thwei was collecting his trophies and headed back to the ship when he literally stumbled upon Katherine by accident. 2, Ta'roga, is the one the OWLF actively went to hunt but upon learning of Compton (curious to see if you know what his name reference is to) .
3. Just a fun fact that didn't make it into the end cut of this chapter, the humans were all retired scientists of the lab the predators had been held captive in. Ta'roga's first mission as a full fledged Arbiter was to hunt them all down and kill them. After the whole Lab thing one of the youngbloods stuck with him because he admired Ta'roga so much and Ta'roga figured taking on a student would help him prepare for caring for a human. I had a scene i was doing for this but it just didn't make much sense in the overall context of the story. So I did what The Predator 2018 failed to do, and wiped what didn't make sense to put in what did. (im very salty over that movie still lol. But it will one day be relevant for this plot ;} )
4. I'm so glad you are following and love the chapter!
5. Hugs from a New Yorker
P.S. I reply to almost all reviews anon or not on the story itself, i was just pretty sure you’d see here first.












