#seeking constructive criticism

[kikislesbianaunt]

Dappled Sun

(15th Nov 2023)

Deep in the heart of dappled sun,

Where twisted arms of wood are spun.

Arachne's children cry before

A twisted heart, a rotten core.

My blood of sorrow, bones of sweat

Tell stories I must not forget.

The crunch of shattered hopes and dreams,

The roar of horrors never seen,

Are all the sounds that fill the air

Where shadows walk without a care

For those great wonders never done

Deep in the heart of dappled sun.

[ya-muthaa]

Hey guys this is my oc Isabella everybody say hi Isabella

(Seeking constructive criticism)

[kikislesbianaunt]

Delusion

(10th Dec 2023)

I wonder, do the Seraphim cry

Those holy angels most on high

Do they weep like you or I

Do they feel pain when others die

When mankind's horrors fill their eye.

I wonder, do the Nereids scream

When such destruction they hath seen

Those daughters of the lake and stream

When hated they hath never been

Yet drowned and killed by man's esteem.

I wonder, do the Dryads run

From what their children hath become

Where gentle guards are bathed in sun

And told thy work be left undone

Lest fallow rot be formed as one.

I wonder, do the Lillim laugh

When man destroys on their behalf

Yet still he kneels at His hearth

To use the father's holy staff

To carry out His bloody wrath.