Two Days (9k, M) posted 28 MAR 2014
Sherlock (TV), 3,743 hits, 189 kudos
Summary: Sherlock's arrested and John must use "his own methods" to free him before his reputation is ruined. A present day, BBC-Sherlock remix of "Two Days," a Victorian, ACD-Sherlock Holmes story by tweedisgood.
Grade: C+
What I would do differently: This story did not need to happen, despite how much I love tweedisgood's original; I just don't think it works as well in the universe of BBC Sherlock as I wanted it to. If I were to rewrite it today, I'd have changed it much more, structurally, and not tried as hard to preserve the tone and language of the source material--it should be in my voice if it's my story.
I'm so very very glad that I eventually learned I could just delete comments from jerks, and not engage with them; this story brought along a really mean reader who accused me of plagiarism because she clearly didn't understand transformative works, blanket permission to remix, etc, etc. I'd have shut her down WAY earlier if I'd only known better. I enjoyed deleting her comments (and my replies) just now!
Notes: All my favourite lines from this are lifted from the original story; I don't think I added anything very valuable, though I did really love tweedisgood's story and had good intentions of paying homage to something I loved. There's something to be learned here that reminds me of a thing I try to teach my children: we can like something without having to own it.
I would not write a story like this now. But, along with other stories I recently wrote up, Acid (with a co-author) and Five Things the Other Doctor Whispered in Rose's Ear (using the "five things' trope/structure), it's an indication of how early I was in my journey, and I do think it was smart of me to just try a bunch of different things, whether they worked well or not, as it helped me find my strengths as an author.
I still recommend Cellar_Door's podfic of the original story by tweedisgood. Where do we even listen to podfics anymore? Surely not still on soundcloud?














