Hi me again and because Hyperfixation and things like that
-First, I have to congratulate you on the designs, they're beautiful. I literally spend hours looking at Forks. Kian is beautiful too, I love him, but Forks won my heart.
And that, combined with the fact that I love your drawing style, is so pleasing to the eye,The coloring is simple yet beautiful, and I love how you do the lines and how the colors blend together—it's all a beautiful mix.And that, combined with the fact that the sprites are animated, I won't lie, I first stare at how their mouths move, then I look at the text, and when Fork's tail and ears move AAAAAA,And I'll probabl donate you. I like helping people, and since I don't have to pay anything yet, even though I'm of legal age, I use my money to help others.
-Fork:Yeah,i love Fork,As I said,I'm mesmerized watching him, and I have proof,I'm also afraid that he'll The reason of cannibalism, because we've already seen that he doesn't care about hurting himself ,so what if he hurt himself to feed us, or that Kian is a cannibal,Although we remember Forks is a fox and might "hunt" someone for food, in short, one of the love interests is a cannibal.Also I don't know how the MC managed to resist to tell Forks to sleep in the same bed with them because I would,I would fall asleep curled up with him,I also find it funny to think that Forks is jealous of Mc's fictional crushes(Because he's probably jealous of all of MC's real-life crushes, because we know MC tells him everything, so they tell him about they crushes too)
Like him being Jealousy, I don't know, Kaito From vocaloid is so funny to me (although he's probably jealous of the character on the keychain that MC carries, I can't remember the name of the series, sorry) yeah another also I feel like To caress him and kissing his bandages; I hope there are more options of MC being very clingy/affectionate with him And I love the detail of the black gradient on he hands. He also has it on his feet? (Because I can't remember right now) Also, to me, MC being myself and me being be neurodivergent I like to think that Fork now helps my Mc remember things (because ADHD without hyperactivity in my case) And now that I think about it, does Fork know how to read? Maybe since he was with MC since they were little, he learned to read whit MC,and I'm planning to make a small ita bag of Forks (I make the badges myself, so it won't go through any company, in case you're worried about them stealing the designs or using AI) If you give me permission, I might sound annoying always asking for permission, but after all, they're YOURS OCs and You dictate what can and cannot be done,And another thing, I don't know why, but I think the song or a fragment of the song "Steampianist-Things" would suit Forks,Because if he was aware of everything when he was a doll, imagine not being able to talk to the person he loves most. Then he's jealous of humans; he wants hands like theirs, eyes that cry like theirs,idk I thought of him when I heard The song
Other things I liked: I don't know if you did it on purpose, but the fact that Kian, for example, isn't visible at the beginning and is crossed out reminds me of Silent Voice,And I also like that MC can say be not good at being social; for example, my Mc is terrible because of anxiety (I still don't know how I'm working up the courage to do this haha) And I love Ashley, she's so cute, I love her so much, I love how she cares about MC and how sociable she is,she is cute potato,But I'm afraid she might die because of crazy love interests, don't worry baby girl in another universe nothing bad will happen to you,haha,I'll cry if something bad happens to her, and also a funny fact: I don't know why I thought Kian had dog ears, like he was a golden retriever. And another thing I wonder about is the characters have nationality?I don't know if you have it, but I also ask because I usually make my MCs Spanish because I am, and I almost always use a very Hispanic surname,And I wonder if MC has a canon nationality and affects The Lore,Oh! And another question: do the rabbit icons affect anything? Because, for example, I chose one that's closer to my skin tone. Do you plan to add skin tones in the future? And speaking of that, I'm really intrigued by the options, for example, the mobile phone. What will we be able to do with it? Will we be able to text to the characters? And I'm also intrigued by how the calendar works, even though it sounds dum
And I think that's all. I might be forgetting something, and I'm sorry if it's disorganized or too long and I keep going around in circles, but I'm really passionate about the game,And I hope I've written everything correctly, having dyslexia isn't for the faint of heart, haha.
First off, thank you for all your praise! I'm glad you enjoyed the game's narrative and design :DDD It's funny, actually. I was in this dev server a while ago absolutely lamenting how I thought none of my games were getting clicks because my art style didn't qualify as good-looking enough to warrant people's attention (and in that post was the first time I floated the original concept of RBS omg), but here I am now! Honestly feels unreal when I hear someone likes my graphics, and part of the reason why they're animated is because I feel like I need to compensate in every area possible to make up for the gaps in my abilities, but I honestly think that's the self-critic in me winning dominance. Obviously there's a lot more I can do to improve my actual art, but I'm happy that people still enjoy it as it is now.











