We all have stories in our minds which need an open space to breathe. But, while letting them do so we must look after things that needs to be arranged properly.
Every story has some or other kind of conflict, a conflict is a kind of hindrance between the main characters and its goals. Let us take a look at all those elements that's compose a story and not just a story but a gripping fiction book.
The main characters and his/her's sidekick.
The main character should be completely drafted, it should not only have strengths, but also flaws and weakness that makes it more realistic. The flaws or imperfections do not need to be big, like a laid back employee is actually a night time serial killer. The flaws could be small but also provide value to the plot, or the pacing or story.
For instance, Kelsey, a high school teen is a straight A student, but is introvert and keeps things to herself, she has only one friend. The last time she tried to talk with a guy, he ignored her desperately and thought she was just too nerd with glasses and hair pulled up in plaits. She is aspiring medical student, who wants to fly away from her country to be as far from her aggressive father as possible, but she will have to go to another city with a group of five unknown people to get an A in one of her Subject and she dreads the trip.
See ? In the above paragraph Kelsey is a straight a student, has a best friend and an amazing family, but with her shyness she is not able to make friends with anybody and boys think they are better away from her. Just a small flaw or things that keep the main character from achieving her goals works great.
These flaws serves as an internal conflict for the story. Now coming to the supporting people of your mc, which means the love interests and the sidekicks. I've seen this in my indie books, the side kick and love interests of mc are sometimes present just for the sake of having a friend or boyfriend. Writer, do some justice with their fellow besties, don't you think they deserve some back story and flaws and perfections just like your mc. I'm not asking you to put two whole pages for their description, but a small paragraph is enough.
Without a conflict the story seems dragging, boring and forces you to put it back on the shelf. So putting up the hurdles in the character's way of achieving goals can turn out promising thing to do.
To add more drama, provide your mc with two goals, so that your mc has to sacrifice one to get another.
Make the flaw of your mc the main ingredient to achieve their goal and then show how they take up hardship to polish their flaw and what changes they undergo as a human in general.
Give them internal and external conflict. The internal conflict being the way that they feel about certain things, maybe they don't like cheating to get to a certain job, its against their moral. And the external conflict can be the competition for the job is between her and another man who is a Harvard graduate and as much talented as she is, but he is willing to do the illegitimate thing he company asks him to do. To make matters even worse he is the brother of her ex best friend and he hates her deeply.
Keep subplots ready, the much required element of the story, which pushes the story ahead- the subplots. Those are the teeny weeny happenings in the story that happens between the start point till the mc achieves his goal. A subplot too contains conflict but a minor one, where the small fight with neighbour over his car erupts.
But always be aware of the amount of conflict and drama you put in. A lot of action scenes (conflict) can make the story too fast and can even confuse the reader. In case of conflict In subplot, make sure those are relevant and related to stories or else, if the subplots describe some incident which are left unnoticed or unanswered I'm next chapters, till the end, you need to think about them again, as in do you really need them ?
A main point in keeping fiction reals is don't exaggerate the conflict and the love scenes. Not everyone's life are constantly bad and not everyone's lives are constantly happy. So try to balance of the story with equal or relative amounts of happy, sad, angry, and hilarious moments.
Further will be discussed tomorrow.
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