Time Post-Critique Response
When it comes to the Time Project, I think I did alright. Someone brought up that maybe I could have had the balloon more towards the middle, and with that, maybe they are right and people could have seen more of what is going on. I agree that it maybe would have made this video a little bit better. I also agree with the fact that it could have maybe been a little bit more slower so people can see more of the water falling towards the ground. The slow motion video I made was kind of a last minute idea that I had made before the critique. I wanted to add more of an effect to the project. That is why I added the water after I started using the kitchen knife in this process. Before I had the knife, I was just using a pen. These additional items added more emotion and interest, I believe. I like that people thought it was interesting and made them want to watch it over and over again. I originally wanted to do a collection of still images, but I felt that it wasn’t working and the photos kept getting blurry. Other than what was suggested during the critique, I am happy with the end result of this project. Other than the animation project in Foundations of Digital Media, I have never really made videos as art works before, so this was something new and different for me.










