Robin Tharja and Henry should be dark skinned. I also wish Robin had recovered his memories mid way through and before that having some muscle memory which affiliated him more to Plegia .
Maybe adding characterization such as being comfortable in the desert or by remembering about dark magic or even the religion he grew up with.
I know it was said her mom took him from his crib, but i’d be much more interesting if he had grown in the plegians culture in his formative years. That would allow him to act as the middle ground to help bridge the conflict between ylisse and Plegia.
Also adding more story of Chrom’s father actions. maybe Chrom’s father became fearful of their religion for being different and thus he made the crusades , but later that helping create a more extremism factions of their religion. Maybe Grima not being a god of annihilation, but rather of vengeance and retribution?
I would also completely rewrite Validar’s grimleal to be an extremism faction of their local religion that formed after the crusades, with most of the common folk not being quite as extremism.
Robin could act as a middle ground, helping bridge the conflict, someone who grew up in Plegia culture and who later becomes aware of the history between the two nations, while being the vessel and/or reincarnation of their dead god. It would add so much more weight to Chrom’s actions of deciding to help a stranger from the enemy nation.
And it strengths the theme against the cycle of violence.
Him being the vessels for the god of retribution and vengeance for his people being adverted, because the current king of the nation (Chrom) is trying to acknowledge and mend the damage his father did in the past. Echoing Emmeryn’s dying wish for them to have peace
With everything changing in the original timeline due to Chrom and Emmeryn being killed.
Awakening has very good ideas, but it relies on a lot of orientalism and painting the bad guys as very one dimensional, in spite of having a very interesting background for the current conflict of the game.
I mean you've cottoned on to a lot of what I'm changing in my rewrite because I'm trying to eliminate or tone down the racism and such, and because Plegia fascinates me. I'm even rewriting Validar but a lot of that is redacted for sake of it not being spoiled in fic. But I will go into him as a person.
Henry's still going to be pale but he's albino in my writings so that's the only reason.