Introducing, CMAUs!!
Classic Meets AUs is a project that I started on 2/12/24. Itās exactly what itās titled: Sans Undertale being thrown into other Alternate Universes.
I put this on hiatus immediately after making the first part because of personal life, but now that I'm back almost two years later, there are glaring problems that I must fix. These include (but aren't limited to!):
Pacing.Ā
Itās too fast in certain areas where it would be more beneficial to have one panel without any speech, and just of the setting perhaps?Ā
Additionally, I donāt think I should have started Sans seeing this straight away.
Papyrus.Ā
The first time we see Paps, as well as the third, he looks odd? First, I think my problem is with perspective. Thirdly, I think that I drew him tooā¦chibi?? By accident??
Anatomy.Ā
Those boxes I drew Sans weird bro. CHANGE IT. NOOOOOWWWWWWW
Positioning.Ā
On the third page, I think the eyes struggle with where to move. To better this, I would switch around the last two speech bubbles.
Plot Holes.
I establish that this is a Pacifist route by making Sans wonder if he āfell down Mt Ebottāā¦so why would he immediately call out for Toriel?? He doesn't know that she should be there. And therefore, isn't the dust less suspicious...?
So, yeah. Progress is back at zero.
This time, I've come prepared with a google doc and half of a proper script.
COVER and OLD PAGE 1 + 2 preview
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