Chapter 2 is out!
Chapter two is out! Exactly a year after the first, which at the very least is an amusing consistency. This update adds over 40,000 words, doubling the length of the demo!
I’ve stared for what feels like decades at the words on the screen so I could really use some help spotting inconsistencies (especially with characters!), issues with pacing, places of confusion. I am absolutely overwhelmed with this for a first project, but I am equally determined to continue. I’m a little desperate for feedback so please tell me what you think! If you liked it, tell me why. If you didn’t, tell me what. If you gave it a shot but it failed to grab you attention let me know where and why if you can!
I hope things start to come together strongly for this chapter and you enjoy it as much as I did writing it.
I’ve a few more in-depth thoughts about a few things I could use suggestions and help with and I’ll post those in a little while.
In the meantime I hope you have had a happy new year and enjoy the story!
-Icaro
DEMO
Things to expect in this chapter: Two (2) fights. Three (3) new ROs. A lot of walking. The calasso being cute. More worldbuilding! And more!
