have I...done right?

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I am...Emmeryn. There...is...much I do not... remember. But... I do know... that ...there are... people.... I ... love. ...Somewhere. [Independent roleplay blog for Emmeryn from Fire Emblem: Awakening. Nothing belongs to me unless stated otherwise. M!A: Child for a week.]

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[crap mom almost caught me on the computer crap crap crap goodnight]

#ooc #still trying to figure out how to implement that criticism #bleeeeeeh #*sigh*#*rolls away endlessly*

Your writing is pretty good, and I think you handle descriptions and scene setup very well! Emmeryn's dialogue sounds awkward at times, though; sometimes it seems like she's just saying a normal sentence the way a normal person would, only punctuated with a lot of random ellipses, while at other times the wording is almost TOO garbled. It seems the balance is very hard to grasp. Despite that, your RPs are still very enjoyable to read! I wish you luck in the future!

[Ayah, you’re right. It is really awkward - I didn’t see just how bad it was until this. Thank you very much for your input; I’ll do my best to work on it. Sorry.]

#ooc #I suck so bad at taking criticism ugh #Probably didn't even spell it right.#Thank you very much anon.

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"You... fight... good. I do not... know... you well... but... you help... people... smile... and laugh..."

quinnee123-deactivated20190118

Write an honest review on my roleplaying skills- I'd love to know what I'm doing right, and what I can improve on.

#freaking terrified

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"You... are... good to talk... with... not too... complicated... speech..."

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"Pity... you most... I do not... hate... you... Resent, some... you are... difficult..."

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"...I... know... you little... but I... see... you fight... with... most of courage..."

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"You are... dear... to me... I remember... hardly anything... but... this for sure... is... true..."

memesandmorememes

Send me a ♥ to find out how my muse feels towards yours.

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[Oh...um...can I say thank you real quick?

At some point over the course of the day, my follower count both hit and surpassed 150. Thank you all for making my experience what it has been, despite the constant irregularity of my posting, the usually inadequate replies and the like, and...yeah.

Basically. Thank you. So, so much. I hope to stay here for some time yet. <3]

#ooc #emily anne shenanigans

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Stricken wide-eyed at the sight of the multitude of people mulling about, Emmeryn dipped into a bit of a bow. She didn't know how many were paying attention, but wouldn't it be best to greet them anyway?

"Good...day..."