Me and some of my friends came up with this script. (i’m currently hoping that trashboombanger will voice it)
Do you have any advice as to how to do panneling for it? I’m pretty new to doing comics and I’d really like to make this into one. Yours are SO good and your panel layouts are just amazing!
Tell me what you think and if it’d be an ok comic please?
Opening scene: Sans drags in his pet human.
“What the fuck were ya thinking? Huh? Letting one of those damn dogs touch ya?”
He spins them around and clasps their cheeks in his bony palms.
“You’re mine. Ya hear me? MINE. Ain’t nobody gets ta touch you but me. But I guess I gotta remind ya of that huh sweetheart?”
He drags them over to the couch and pulls them over to stand in front of him.
“Now, bend over. Over my lap….I said BEND. OVER!”
They reluctantly lie over his lap and he pulls down their pants to expose their rump.
“Now…I’m gonna spank ya, and’ I’m not gonna be nice about it.”
“Sorry for what? I cant heaaar you.”
“Wow, that was a loud scream. Aww, you’re starting to bruise a little. hmm?” His voice is laced with false sympathy.
“You’re sorry for letting them touch ya? Right…I believe that.” His voice is laced with sarcasm and he slaps them again, hard.
“Quitcher squirming pet! Ohh hoh..what is this? heh…yer all wet. Ya seem ta be liking this hmph…doesn’t seem like much of a punishment if yer liking it” his voice is incredulous at finding his pet wet and wanting.
“no? It hurts? Well goddamn right it hurts! It shouldhurt.” Irritation laces his voice but then it dips in register as an idea comes to him.
“mmm…but the sight of ya like this…hearing ya screamin’ for me….what if I touch ya here? heh…now those squeals I like…how about if I just trace the tip of my finger here…..mmm y'know pet…I think I’ve gotta better idea to show ya who ya belong to.”
He chuckles lowly and the sound of clothing being shed could be heard.
“By the time I’m done with ya, the only thing you’ll be able to think of is me, the only thing you’ll want is me. Touching ya, tasting ya….fucking you.”
He half humms, half growls slightly as his voice ghosts over their ear, soft and sensual.
“Now, let’s get started. Pet.”
Ahhh, thank you for trusting me enough to ask about that! ;;U;;
And I’m glad you like my comics’ layout <33
I’m afraid I’m not the best person you could’ve gone to for tips but I’m going to try my best! (I succ at explaining)
LONG response, tips and examples under the cut:
tangentwithtanner
annaxmalina
ellievsbear
romaincrisis
kianamaiart
vaporwave
prguitarman
dailybridgerton
discoholicmusic
theartofmadeline
