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Percival: You know that feeling when youโre thinking about someone and they appear out of nowhere almost instantly?
Theseus: Yeah, why?
Percival: Well, in completely and utterly unrelated news, Newt walked in on me masturbating.
tfw u get too many feels, and want to draw keyframes
Shoutout to everyone who doesnโt look forward to the holidays
Shoutout to those who dread being around family that likes to attack everything you are, believe, feel. Having to put up with them is no cakewalk.
Shoutout to those whoโve already got depression and the seasonal aspect just seems to make it worse
Shoutout to those who donโt have a boyfriend/girlfriend and are tired of being asked that question. Whether youโre single by choice or not, itโs absolutely your business. Also, not having one doesnโt make or break you, your life isnโt lacking anything
Shoutout to the people with vaginas being constantly asked when youโre gonna have babies. Whether you want kids or not, that is your decision. And fuck anyone who decidesย โyouโll change your mind one dayโ. Kids are not for everyone.
Shoutout to those whose sexualities are anything but straight and have to deal with family possibly assuming things about you. Once again, your business and you donโt owe anyone a damn thing.
Shoutout to those whose families reject you, or want to change you. Your life is yours alone. I am so sorry theyโre toxic to you.
Shoutout to the college dropouts whoโll never hear the end of it from family, those struggling with school, considering dropping out, those who just canโt handle school. College is a choice,and itโs not for everyone.
Shoutout to those who donโt want to come out of their rooms during the holidays. Put yourself first, take care of yourself. You are not obligated to socialize with family.
Shoutout to the mentally ill whose conditions might be made worse this season because of family, friends, your environment, etc.
Shoutout to those who know their family and/or friend gatherings will end in tears, fights, or violence. Iโm sorry you have to deal with that.
Shoutout to the abused, those whose hurt doesnโt take a holiday. Weโre here for you as best we can be.
Shoutout to those who donโt have the funds to afford gifts or holiday celebrations. I understand how that weighs on you, how bad it feels not to be able to contribute when you really want to. No, material things arenโt everything but letโs stop pretending they donโt make some people feel pretty good, if only for a while
Shoutout to those who wonโt be able to be seated around a table this holiday season because thereโs very little to eat in the first place. If you can manage, please donโt be ashamed to ask for help, or to visit soup kitchens and such.ย
Shoutout to those who want to be with loved ones but canโt because you canโt afford to visit them, or you have to work, etc.
Shoutout to the lonely, to those who donโt have family or friends to spend the time with. Iโm here for you and I know countless others here on Tumblr are too. Just reach out.
Shoutout to those who donโt celebrate anything and these days are just ordinary days for you.
Sending you all good vibes in dealing and surviving the holidays. 2016 has been a ROUGH year, to say the least. Please donโt go it alone, if you can. Reach out to your Tumblr peers. And also, donโt just be caring, loving, and generous during the holidays. Do it all year long.
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What are your turn ons? ;)
feminism and harry styles
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He was so cute & nice even tho Harry was being weird as fuck ๐คฃ we Stan
I shouldโve left it blurry and saved us the heartache
harry at the start of the decade vs harry at the end of the decade
Physically Iโm fine, emotionally Iโm Fine Line
remember when we thought Canyon Moon was gonna be the sad song and Falling was gonna be the happy love song.....we were fools
FINE LINE. THE ALBUM. OUT NOW.
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anne:
2 Tips for Adding Emotional Weight to Your Story
As writers, we want our work to hold weight โ for our charactersโ actions, emotions, and desires to resonate with and impact our readers. But how do we make that happen?
The most helpful advice, in my experience, has been to:
Make the internal become external, and
Make the external become internal.
Letโs talk about what that means and how these tips can help you add emotional weight to your story.
1. Make the internal become external
To โmake the internal become externalโ is to take the interior aspects of your character (their fears, desires, pains, and epiphanies) and find ways to express them with external actions. For example:
If Marcos realizes his girlfriend doesnโt truly love him, donโt just make him mope; have him throw the engagement ring he purchased into the river.
If Amelia feels overworked and stressed at her new job, donโt just show her exhausted in bed; show her bailing on plans with the people she cares about or giving up her favorite pastimes.
If Kara is afraid to get onstage and perform as Lady Macbeth, donโt just have her wait in fear; make her run out on the show on opening night.
By expressing your characterโs emotions and realizations through clear external actions, you add weight to what theyโre going through.
2. Make the external become internal
The goal here is similar, but reversed. Where before you were taking an internal emotion and accentuating it with action, now youโre taking the external elements of your story (plot, character actions, external conflicts, etc.) and making them have internal ramifications for your characters. For example:
If Thomas gets slapped by his older sister during a disagreement, donโt just move on like it never happened; make it change the dynamic of their relationship for the rest of the story.
If Davyโs new boyfriend excessively dotes upon him, donโt just have him awkwardly brush him off; make Davy tentative and uncertain because heโs never been in a healthy relationship before.
If Anna loses the championship match of a tennis tournament, donโt just have her grudgingly accept defeat; make her feel crushed because of her impossibly high expectations for herself.
By taking external actions or events and tying them to your characterโs deepfelt emotions and, when possible,ย their core struggle, you add weight to what happens in your story. Everything starts to matter, and that makes for captivating storytelling.
A Final Word
I want to clarify that Iโm not telling you to make your characters act and react in ways that donโt make sense for them. Always stay true to your characters.ย
But I do encourage you to always look for opportunities to merge the internal and external aspects of your story โ because thatโs the key to telling stories with true emotional weight.
Good luck, and good writing, everybody. :)
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Your stories are worth telling. For tips on how to craft meaning, build character-driven plots, and grow as a writer, follow my blog.
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