“Personally I love what you’ve created I think it’s a beautiful way to remember someone and to have all those memories of someone in one place as well as the fact that it is so personal to you not only means that it’s something that you’ve kind of done for yourself but also something that I feel many people can relate to from different aspects of whether they personally love someone who they were really close to or whether or not they’ve lost someone who they can’t quite remember at that time that person died.
I really like the simplicity and the timing of the video as it’s not too long that you get bored but it’s also not too quick that you can’t really understand what’s going on.
One of the only things I would do differently is maybe add subtitles throughout the whole thing so even when the whole images are being shown are you still able to at least read what’s been said as this also means that the artefact will be more inclusive as it means people who are difficult of hearing are still able to have the full experience and understanding of the message that you’re trying to get across. I feel as if there’s many things you can do as well just with the one video that you have made and the fact that you’ve made two of course widens the perspective.
I think it would be nice to also just have snippets of the clippers maybe some sort of advertising material.
But I just really think it’s a really good project and you can tell you’ve spent a lot of time on it by how well things lineup together and how smoothly the transition is between image to text to video again it being Personal to you just add something a little extra as well.”
I wanted to get feedback on my work as well as Mark, I found it very useful to see what someone else would do to improve the videos, I like the idea of using subtitles to make it inclusive
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