“The Victims” Sharon Olds
Sharon Stuart Cobb was born on November 19, 1942 in San Francisco, California, but was brought up in Berkeley, California along with her siblings.. She was raised as a “hellfire Calvinist”, as she describes it. Her father, like his before him, was an alcoholic who was often abusive to his children. In Olds’ writing she often refers to the time(or possibly even times) when her father tied her to a chair. Following her PhD on Emerson, Olds let go of an attachment to what she thought she 'knew about' poetic convention. Freed up, she began to write about her family, abuse, sex, focusing on the work not the audience.
When Mother divorced you, we were glad. She took it and took it in silence, all those years and then kicked you out, suddenly, and her kids loved it. Then you were fired, and we grinned inside, the way people grinned when Nixon's helicopter lifted off the South Lawn for the last time. We were tickled to think of your office taken away, your secretaries taken away, your lunches with three double bourbons, your pencils, your reams of paper. Would they take your suits back, too, those dark carcasses hung in your closet, and the black noses of your shoes with their large pores? She had taught us to take it, to hate you and take it until we pricked with her for your annihilation, Father. Now I pass the bums in doorways, the white slugs of their bodies gleaming through slits in their suits of compressed silt, the stained flippers of their hands, the underwater fire of their eyes, ships gone down with the lanterns lit, and I wonder who took it and took it from them in silence until they had given it all away and had nothing left but this.
The speaker starts off this poem with a really bitter tone. She goes into describing how happy she was when her parents got a divorce. Her mother, who seems to be in the right in the speaker’s eyes, “took it, in silence, all those years, and then kicked [her father] out suddenly.” The speaker then goes on to discuss all the other bad things that happened to her father that ended up making her happy. He lost his job, got all of his fancy things taken away, and all she can do is laugh at his misfortune. She laughed and hated him with all of her being until his “annihilation.” At this point in the poem there is a sudden switch in tone. The author becomes almost sympathetic for her father. This switch in tone is super effective since the whole poem is written in a single stanza and the switch is completely unexpected. All she can think about now is how her father had to go through the same things, taking it and taking it until finally he had nothing. It’s like what the speaker and her mother went through, but she never realized it until later on. The free verse structure of this poem also adds an interesting effect to the poem. It gives the speaker this rambling effect, like she is telling her father all of the feelings she has had built up inside for so long, and is no getting to finally release. The speaker is resolving the conflict in her mind just by reviewing the story and looking at it from a different side.











