Following on from our feedback in week 7 although we did not get the time to meet up before class, we decided as a group to spend the first few hours trying to improve our artefact, as well as trying to map out our idea. So that we at least get a visual aspect in what we are trying to create. One of the areas we needed to improve within my group was adding more in-depth information into our different layers. We took the feedback on board and discussed within our group on how we should move forward with the layers we have. I decided to change our layers slightly as we are getting closer and closer to the deadline. As I felt as if the layers, we started off with looked like they would need a lot of time, and it would be very complicated to deliver certain layers. Therefore, I came up with some new ideas and presented them to my group which they loved:
2021 (celeb face, plastic surgery.) Billboards, On things
2121 (Machines, factory) Hologram in Sky
3000 (Animals, other faces & Cyborgs. Machines and Maybe chip) Advertising Chip Inserted when born
5000 (Be anything, you want to be limitless) Injection to make advertising Hereditary
The present-day layer- Our main focus would be creating a piece of advertisement based around celebrities all looking the same, due to getting plastic surgery done. I came up with the idea of us demonstrating this, on a billboard. As a lot of advertising is done on billboards and very common in today’s society (21st Century).
For the first future layer – We came up with the idea of a Hologram in the sky. We got this idea from the Hunger Games when they presented the different names. I then stated to my group if we wanted our piece to be free or exclusive, meaning that it will only be applicable to a certain demographic group. As you would need to be able to afford the chip in order to have access to the facilities provided with it. We then discovered as a group, that you will already have access to the chip through your inheritance. This means that it is already in your body and does not need to be brought in advanced (Become who you want to be). We than mapped out the pros and cons:
Everyone has equal opportunity to be who they want to be
No discrimination (Ability to change all the time)
Justice system would collapse
Possible extinction of humans
Possibly no individuality
Class, Rich and Wealthy. Status.
Those who have it would be Immortal
Alienation to those who can’t afford (become slaves)
Division in society (unable to correct)
We than decided to move away from advertisement for the fourth layer which will be presented in the year 5000 (Be anything you want to be) and there would not be such thing as advertisement and will no longer exist or be beneficial. We had to really think in-between the lines meaning that we had to figure out how we would present the last layer of our palimpsest. We did not really come to a conclusion on how it will be presented. Sometime this week we will surely come to a conclusion in order for us to move forward further.
We then started to do a rough sketch of the first layer so that we could see it visually ourselves. As one of our main objectives we had to achieve before the end of the class, was starting to create a mock-up piece of our different layers.
To conclude, this week was very hectic as the site we usually use to interact with one another was acting up badly, which wasted a lot of time. We were able to cover all of the feedbacks that was given to us and resolve the issues as well as bring the project to life through our different sketches which we did digitally.
We came up with a schedule plan, look below:
19th March Final ideas: Final sketches, composition, all materials gathered. Decided on final media platform
26th March Development: Creating finishing touches.
1st Final draft and presentation.
9th April Final Outcome and presentation