Shannon Rosle

Soon to be teacher who loves dogs, baking, and friends

[ros-sha16]

Good Design

An example of a good design is a mechanical pencil. I think this is a good design because it is very useful for anyone who needs a pencil. These also can be refillable unlike a regular pencil, so it saves a lot of wood. I find them to be a good design as they also come in different variations. You can have preferance on what thickness point you want and they come in different fun cosmetic designs. They are also just small and useful to have in your bag without getting lead markings everywhere since the lead can retract back into the pencil.

[jdombach]

Pivoting Guide Feedback

This is a portion from my Web Writing Pivoting Guide. I am wondering if placing my example tweet here is okay for the design and flow? Above is one of my tips and below if an explanation of the tweet. I don't want my examples to be out of place and not fit the rest of the guide so I am wondering if this fits in the guide!

[ros-sha16]

I think the placement of your example is good! I think it makes sense where it is as you first read the tip and then go to see an example of how to use that tip. I think it flows well within the guide. I like that you included a small paragraph explaining what the purpose of the example was. I think having the example in the middle helps the read be able to go back and forth between the example and the actual tip to see what you are saying works.

[ros-sha16]

The Appeal for Podcast

An audience listens to a podcast for different reasons. Some of those reasons could be for entertainment, they have an interest in the topic that is being discussed. Or it could be an educational podcast where the audience is getting information about a topic that they are interested in. I feel like in a long podcast, the creators can dive more deep into the topic of their choice. The structure of the podcast can be like an essay where you have a fun introduction, then the main body with the key points and getting depth with those, and then wrapping it all up with a meaningful conclusion. I feel like having a fun easy-going introduction will make the listener stay to listen.

[ros-sha16]

Long Writing Posts - Style Rule

For long writing posts, I think it is important to grab your audiences attention in the beginning but also through out the post. I think adding a picture in the beginning that relates to your content can help your audience be drawn to your post and want to read it. So they don't just see a very long paragraph that no one want to read.

I also think breaking your thoughts and content into paragraphs can also help the audiences focus and attention so its not a continuous paragraph of talking about different things. Paragraphs can help not only you organize your thoughts in the post but also your audience when they are look at the post too.

[ros-sha16]

Pivot Guide Feedback

This is one of my style rules for my guide. Do you think this would be considered a good style rule? I am concerned that it more so relates to the content not the style or grammar. Should I change it to something different?

[ros-sha16]

Favorite Show

One of my favorite shows is New Girl. I still love to rewatch it occasionally. I love this show and was sad when it ended but we got a good conclusion for all the characters. I kept having this show in mind when I was creating the story and the posts. I tried to get into the mindset if New Girl got cancelled halfway and left the fans on a cliffhanger. I channeled that into my angry fan posts.

[jdombach]

Design Project Feedback

Here is a portion of my design project. I am wondering if this would be a sufficient reason for the cancelation as a fan? I feel like usually companies don't share the specifics of the reason behind a show being cancelled. So this was one of the responses I had to try and give part of a reasoning.

[ros-sha16]

I think that is a sufficent answer. I agree that typically we don't see companies share specifics but what if they did? Would it anger the fans or the company more if they actually told their fans why?

I do like your response, I think it gives a good balance of sharing reasons but not giving specific details.

[ros-sha16]

Design Project Feedback

This is a part of my design project part 1. I am describing my audience for my tv show. I am wondering if this is too vague and if I should add more detail into the audience? My audience is pretty wide in range of gender that age and interest are the big factors in my audience.

[ros-sha16]

Instagram Reel - Style Rule

For Instagram reels, I think a style rule would be looking at your thumbnail of the reel. I think that is what will draw your target audience to your reel in the first place. If the thumbnail is a picture of a cat but the video isn't about cats then that is very misleading but if the picture is of details to an event and the reel talks about that event it would give the audience a good understanding from first glance what the reel is about.

[ros-sha16]

Style Rule for Short Posts

I think a key way to write a short posts is to be concise and straight to the point of what ever you are sharing. It makes the post easy and understandable to the user. I also think having a good named header can help the user understand what the content in the post is going to be about. This header is easy to read and you can tell that I am writing about short posts and a style rule for it.

[ros-sha16]

Drafting essays

This is a portion of my draft outline for my How to Write Guide. I knew I wanted to create a blog style guide so I wrote out a outline of each section I wanted to have. This help me stay organized when it come to writing in all the information. Having the outline helps me not get overwhelmed of what I need to put into it and it get me into a better mindset of what I need to write. I found that I am less information heavy when I have outlines for things as well.

[jdombach]

HTWG Sample

This is one portion of my how to write guide. I created my guide as an infographic. I am wondering if the break in pages will be too distracting or if it takes away from this being one cohesive guide? I have the tips and tricks on the first section and my sample content on the second.

[ros-sha16]

I think the breaks are fine to look at. I don't think it will take away from the information you are presenting. As long as you are making sure the sample content is interwine with the tips and trick it will be good. I think sectioning can help your audience go back and forth between each tip and trick.

[ros-sha16]

How to Write Guide Feedback 2

This is one of my examples for one of my tips/tricks. Do you think it is noticable that it is an example? Or should I add something to make it noticable that it is an example? I have already changed the font and bolded it, but should I make it a different color? So my audience can easily see it?

[chaicoughskii4093-deactivated20]

content analysis project

This is part of my content analysis project where I define who the audience that I am creating this project is for. I am trying to be concise since my audience is content creators, but do you think I should add some more detail? Or maybe an image to help convey my ideas?

[ros-sha16]

To my knowledge, I think the audience is people who follow your content creators? So people who love classical music, would be your audience.

I think you should go more in-depth in who the audience for your content creator. Think about the demographic of that audience and talk about how much would a person know about the content.

You should try to give your audience (dr. p and other analytics) a background on the audience the content creators are creating for.

[chaicoughskii4093-deactivated20]

HTWG

This is a section of my HTWG focused on content strategy. Is this too much information on one page? Does the picture distract from the overall message of the slide?

[ros-sha16]

I do not think there is too much information on the slide. I don't really understand the purpose of having the picture there. I don't think there is a problem with have no picture on a slide. If anything maybe add something that is content from your content creators? If it is musically related, maybe a music note or something that shows it is like content?

[elliotwrit318]

Content Analysis

This is a snippet of my content analysis. I would like guidance on any way i can further connect the audience to the information in the data. I would like the audience to understand that the highest numbers do not always show the biggest success overall, and further connect the elements of content strategy to the chart.

[ros-sha16]

For this, maybe go further in depth with the percentages. I feel like you only gave us on percent in your description. Yes its in the chart but the chart just has a bunch of numbers and no explanation to what it means. Talk about how you found those percentages will potentially help your audience to understand the information. Maybe write about the comparision between the one creator and the other creator. What does the 12.5% versus the 5.5% tell the audience? That there is actually more users that are engaging with rejka's content compared to withapencilinhand's content.

[ros-sha16]

How to Write Guide Feedback

This is a portion of my how to write guide. I am talking about the purpose of content strategy and why it is important to my audience. My audience is content creators for college students. Is this too generic sounding that it doesn't actually talk to my audience? Should there be more specific information about content strategy for my specific audience of content creators that are probably also college students? If so what are some suggestions to make it more specific towards my audience?