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It's been a while since I've done this, and even longer since I've shown ANYONE. So please please please be gentle. But I'd love some feedback.
Rough Draft of my poem. Kryptonite
It's times like this that I wish I could take a hand-full of time And toss it over my shoulder Like a pinch of salt Wishing the bad days away I have to stop and ask myself, What happened to all the yesterdays And when did it become tomorrow? Because you see, It's reached the point in my life That I no longer recognize the Man That looks back at me in the mirror And I don't know what happened to the child That once stood in his place. Dressed up like a hero, Mask,cape, and all, Swooping in to save the day, Whenever you would fall But remember to grab on tight And do your best To hold on as we take flight Hold on.... Hold on tightly As the sands of time slip Grain by grain through my finger tips Racing, Always racing in one direction Down the one way highway that we call life And I say highway no freeway Because you know As well as I know That although Slavery ended almost 60 years ago We all struggle not to show The scars as they grow From the struggles we undergo Shackles dragging us below While we go.... About figuring out this crazy thing, We call Life. But until then....... I will fly FAR away. And leave this pain for yesterday Moving from dream to dream But no, not today Because today it all feels, So real And I can't run away I have no more time to steal I have to face my fears today But I know that I am near the end Because I can see the light As colors fade to gray Everything seems alright I see my life as it is My life is real today As I struggle to pick myself up The pain all seems so faraway In the end, It all worked out Because I am me today I used to be lost And now I have found my way Now all my dreams finally real! Until...I wake up today. When I do, I hardly recognize my surroundings, Everything looks, Backwards? Or maybe I guess it's forwards now? So I play along I put my pants on my head And my shoes on my hands Turn them around and And start running It isn't long before I'm lost There are no paths or trails No stops along the guided tour The cart is off the rails I'm here all alone No conducter,passengers, or hobos here My judgement becomes cloudy As I'm guided by my fear This is all so confusing to me A parallel universe? How could this be? Up is now Down And Down is now Up Right is now Wrong And Wrong's all that is Left I don’t know where to go but I keep running back down flights of stairs the up the elevators In through the exits And out through the front I feel like I am running in circles or squares,triangles, or whatever they are now. I stop to catch my breath under the shade of a sycamore tree On a cool autumn evening Leaves dancing in the air Wind whisper secrets The forest begins to stare... And that is when I see you, Standing there, like a shadow in the dark A mere silhouette against the starry night sky You're a glowing angel of the evening A devil of delight You slink and scurry from corner to corner To avoid the coming light I feel it instantly like a, pleasant poison rushing through my veins I feel the nearly euphoric because you numb the pain I know we can never be together I can feel it in my heart but the pain,it nearly kills me When whenever we are apart It's only been 5 seconds, And already I'm under your spell I never meant to love you But I'm head over heels for you I guess I tripped and fell You know you have control of me You know always have and will I have this gaping hole in my heart I hoped our love could fill I can be your Superman, If you'll be my kryptonite I don't know how we'll do it Just give me a chance tonight. But I know you never will, Because you never saw me, You never looked at me the same Maybe you were never there Is this some kind of game? Regardless of what happened I will always come back for you if it’s the last thing I do I don’t care what it takes I love you I will be back for you My ...kryptonite
Around the corner,
Reads a sign, to faded to make out
The paint is all worn, letters faded
Yet still I have no doubt
I fling open the door
And step off the edge,
Before I even look,
The door snaps shut as darkness arrives
Like a nightmare from a book.
Soon I am falling, end over end
Toppling through the emptiness
Darkness racing by as I fall,
Or am I flying?
How long have I been falling
And where's the bottom of thi..
Thud.
We finally made it.
I take a second to see where I've landed
and take in all the sights
A completely barren cave
with the exception of one light
One tiny golden glowing ray
Shining through a crack
Clear at the top, 30 feet up,
All the way in the back
I follow the light as if it's my guide
To a crystal cool clear pool
And what I saw,it couldn't be, I must be a fool,
Yet there I am, as plain as day right before my eyes
A mirror image of me, much to my surprise,
And as I walk towards it,
My heart skips a beat,
I look right at me and off myself a seat.
When i reach the edge of the water
My reflection leans closer to whisper to me....
"I'm so glad that you could make it, We've all been waiting so long, Alas now that your here I shall tell you were to start"
First off. Welcome to my broken heart!
This stairway into nothingness all pathways leads to nowhere The are no doors, or exits here, there are no windows there,
But do not be afraid my son.
Because you are shooting star across the sky A full moon in the light A ancient planet frozen Still hiding in twilight A tower in the shadows A fallen wall to stop the tears This crumbled castle stops me I am drowning in my tears
Only you can save us now, The choices are all yours,
No one is here to help you, or show you where to go
The secret is there is no path, no trail or flow,
No handbook, rules or laws, just let your heart lead you
And you never can get lost.
Life is what you make of it, and never any more,
It's a treasure trove of hidden caves just waiting to explore
That rut your stuck in,will be your grave if you don't change your ways
You have still have so much time left, minutes, hours, days,
Don't be afraid to seize your stars,
While reaching up at Mars,
If you slip,
and lose your grip,
it's not that far at all,
The clouds are right below you,
To catch you when you fall,
And even then if you're still scared.
I know it isn't right
But I am still you're Superman,
And you'll always be my kryptonite
Just shout it out to the skies above
Let the whole world know
You are my one true love.
You're my weakness, don't you know?
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