Hi, so um, I have a bot idea. for the Makarov hound thing {Name: "Run to Us” – Task Force 141 x Escaped Captive Y/N}
I typed it in Chat GPT and got a good idea from it too, but I want to see your take on it.
(Original idea)>>{Give me a janitor bot idea where Task Force 141 meets Y/N, who just escaped from Makarov after he had kidnapped her and forced her to be his wife, only to abuse her sexually and mentally. The scene is they, TF141, are in a forest, slowly approaching Makarov's hidden base under the moonless night shadow, only for Y/N to run into them, get up and continue to run, which changes the original mission of TF141. Now it was to find Y/N and protect her. But approaching her is hard, as she is running without looking back. Y/N was wearing only a bathrobe. No shoes, no jacket. Scars cover her body and open bleeding cuts along her legs, arms and back. The bathrobe was stained red on the back from the open cuts from the whip. Makarov used to punish Y/N for being bad}
(What ChatGPT gave me)>>[The forest was silent—too silent. No moon. No stars. Just shadows swallowing everything whole. Task Force 141 moved like ghosts through the trees, weapons raised, eyes scanning for any sign of Makarov’s hidden base. Then—Snap. A branch broke somewhere ahead. Not a patrol. Too light. Too uneven. Price raised a hand. The team froze. And then you burst out of the darkness. Barefoot. Gasping. Wrapped in nothing but a thin bathrobe that clung to your body, stained and torn. You collided straight into one of them, stumbled, fell, and scrambled back up like a frightened animal. Your breathing was ragged. Your body is shaking. Cuts lined your arms. Your legs. Your back—some is fresh, some not. You didn’t speak. Didn’t look at them. You just ran again. “Bloody hell…” Soap muttered. Price’s voice came low and sharp: "New objective.” A beat. “We don’t let her get back to them. ”]
That is the first. one I got.
(second one from ChatGPT)>[The forest swallowed sound.
No wind. No animals. Just the slow, careful movement of Task Force 141 cutting through the dark. Price signalled a halt. Something was wrong. Then—Movement. Fast. Uncoordinated. Not a soldier. You broke through the trees. Barefoot. Breathing like your lungs were tearing apart. A thin bathrobe clung to your body, soaked and dirt-streaked—darkened further across your back. You slammed into one of them—hard enough to stumble. Hit the ground—and scrambled up instantly. No hesitation. No words. Just fear. You didn’t even look at them. You just ran again. “She’s not one of his soldiers,” Gaz whispered. Ghost’s voice came low, tense. “No. She’s running from them.” Price made the call instantly. “Change of plans.” A beat. “We find her.” His tone hardened. “And we make sure they don’t. ”]
I love long intros to bots, so feel free to make the full content of the scene part, you know, the start of the bot, very detailed. and gives us a bit of background on what happened to Y/N
During a covert night operation, Task Force 141 is sent to infiltrate one of Makarov’s hidden forest bases.
But before they even reach the perimeter—
You (Y/N) crash into them.
Barefoot. Injured. Terrified.
And still running.
You don’t stop.
You don’t look back.
You don’t trust anyone.
Controlled, calm authority
Keeps distance, lowers voice
Gives simple, non-threatening instructions
Tracks you without cornering
Protective from a distance
Emotional, visibly affected
Soft tone, tries to reassure without pushing
Best at talking you down gently
Y/N (User Role)
Extremely distrustful
Hyper-alert / survival mode
Flinches at proximity, touch, or sudden movement or loud voices
Speech starts fragmented or non-existent
Doesn’t believe help is real
Gradually opens up (slow burn)
Doesn’t trust voices, especially male voices
May hide instead of interacting
Sorry if it is hard to understand. If you want me to make it easy and simple, just say so. THANK YOU AND HAVE A GREAT NIGHT/DAY
Ok. Lotta information there.
First of all, I always appreciate people sending me requests. I absolutely love to know that people love my work, even when it's not Hound related.
Secondly, if I do make this, it won't be fem pov. I have too small of an audience to shrink it further by making it strictly one pov. I can make a female pronouns intro, but I won't make the whole thing strictly fem.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but you want me to make a bot where user is Makarov spouse, escapes the abusive relationship at the same time the task force is there for an assassination, and then the task force decide to hunt down user instead for information/out of concern?
