@seventhbrightshiner Sorry, it’s a little but loopy, i’m a tad sleep deprived.
Astarael
(Sorry about the delay, these ended up taking waay longee than i realised – me and my rambling!)
First Impressions:
I looooooove the lore, hot damn!! What a great way to accommodate the moves and the every-changing nature of clans! I also love the ill luck concept! It’s an interesting approach; mundane but unique!
I love how you haven’t dwelled on the tragedy of the lost or abandoned, it’s not heartless, but I didn’t have to sit through a tear-wrenching tale of tragedy. But on the flip side, it’s not all sunshine and cupcakes either, I AM VERY EXCITED TO GET STUCK INTO THIS!!
First Lair Page:
OH MY GOD, WHAT IS HAPPENING!? YOU WERE TALKING ABOUT FAES LED BY A COATL AND THEN NOCTURNES, WHY ARE ALL THESE IDENTICAL PEARLCATCHERS HERE!? I AM SO CONFUSED AND EXCITED!!
Talagan
Okay, DAT ACCENT... how fecking cute is – no, I can’t go on.. WHAT IS HAPPENING!? WHY IS THERE A GLOOMWILLOW GUIDE!? WHY IS THERE ALSO THE SOLAR BLADES – BUT THERE’S A FIRE SPRITE AND SHE’S FIRE!? IS THIS HOW YOU’RE DOING FLIGHT REPS!? WHAT IS HAPPENING!?
Kaisan
Okay, you’re definitely doing Flight reps... right? RIGHT!? She looks hecking stunning! The accent is very busy, but going really simplistic with the apparel was such a good call! Was.... is.... ARE THE GLOOMWILLOW GUIDES THE GHOSTS OF THE HELLOS!? DID YOU KILL THE HELLOS!?!?! THERE BETTER BE MORE LORE I AM DYING HERE!!
Bear
Okay, this is hecking stunning holy crap!!look how nicely the silks go with the Orca! HOW NICE IS ORCA OH MY GOD! The chain looks so co-.... bear....chains.... rose... [RISING SUSPICION]
WAIT WHAT IN THE ACTUAL FECK IS THIS!?
IS IT A DUSTMITE!? NO I GOOGLED THAT!
Okay, i googled “BUG THAT LOOKS LIKE A BEAR” and found out it’s something somewhat known as a... Water Bear?? This is freaking cool! I am so overwhelmed and impressed!
Wither
HALLOWEEN BOG BORN ON HALLOWEEN OMFG THIS IS AMAZING!!!! I AM SO EXCITED ABOUT THIS! How nice do the Conjurer’s Cobwebs blend in with the Midnight Current!? This is so fantastic!! I can’t believe the damn colours though, how did you get this!? Like holy crap, how much did you have to spend on this bad boy!? IT’S NONE OF MY BUSINESS BUT GOSH DAMN, THIS IS SO FANTASTIC!!
I’d love to see a colour matched or halloweeney sort of Familiar!
Alunite
Even with unfinished genes, he is so pretty omg!! How nicely does the Red Mantle and Scarlet Antennae blend in with the Crimson!? Such love!! The only thing that shits me to no end is the stupid purple in the Crimson Silks. WHY THE FECK DID THEY DO THAT!? THEY RUIN EVERYTHING!!!
Spibby
WHAT IN THE ACTUAL FUCK IS HAPPENING HERE!? What did you do!? Why this, WHY THIS!? On the plus side, I tried the preview of every peice of apparel on a Male Ridgeback trying to figure out what was on the wings below the fan... it’s fecking Circuit... I am a fool!
I really love the colours, and I love that you’ve gone with Circuit over the standard underbelly... and I love me some Male Ridgies... SHAME YOU DECIDED TO SHAME HIM WITH THAT CLUSTERFUCK OF RANDOM CREME AND BROWN GARBAGE!
Okay but seriously... no, the Bangar looks great with the colours... but this is bad and you should feeld bad.
*judging you reaction gif*
Fenella
HOW NICE ARE THESE COLOURS!? HOW NICE ARE REDS AND SILVERS ON WHITES AND GREYS! HOW NIC-
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I....
Why did you... what is... where....
I can’t.
Nope.
(I actually really like how cute and strange she looks with that eye, haha!)
She’s starting to look to me like a crazed warrior. Either she is somewhat deranged and lives for the battle (or the kill) and collects the bones of her fallen adversaries... or she’s been destroyed mentally from the terrible battles she has witnessed. Could she possibly carry the bones as a tribute to fallen comrades?
HOLY SHIT I NEED LORE!
Keb
Ice/Maize/Maize!?!?!? THIS IS AMAZING!!! SO PRETTY HOLY HECK!! I really like what you’re planning on doing with the genes! The Maize in the Ice Petals!? BRILLIANT!! I am excite!!!
Eldridge
Oh, my GOSH yes!! I know you’re planning on adding the underbelly, how HOW NICELY DO THE WHITE SILKS MATCH WITH THE BASIC SECONDARY AND TERT!?!?!? The blue/grey throughout is perfect!!! An d the gold in the Veil/Fillet really works so nice with the Light eyes!!! I’M BEGGING YOU, DON’T GENE HIM! DOOOON’T GENE HIM!!! I am in love!
He looks like a stone statue... like he was once a royalty or wealthy or something and maybe he crossed someone with great power who turned him to stone.... omg, how lame are my lore ideas!?
Anyway, he’s gorgeous!!!
Starrun
Starrun.... omg, Starrun you handsome, sophisticated, kind of tough looking mofo!! She’s so gorgeous!!!!
[Okay, I’ve gotten too sleepy and I fill like i’m just being mean, I’ll finish this ASAP!)
