#acrossausrp

[radicalrpt-blog]

Hi! Can we bother you for an opinion, please? Thanks in advance!

Of course, also apologies for this taking six years and a half. But let’s get to it. Logging onto your page I really dig the color scheme, the graphics aren’t my favorite, but the beige has a way to my heart. The background on the asks is a bit dark in my opinion for the rest of the page, and I would suggest changing that. As for the plot I’m not usually into AU’s but I think this is a good idea for all those Harry Potter fans. It’s new and something I haven’t seem before, so props. The navi is well organized and so are the character pages, all in all I can’t really find anything I don’t like. It’s cute, not my cup of tea but I still think this does and will have major potential. Keep doing what you’re doing and I see this staying open for a while!

[discussingrp]

Hi! Can we bother you for an opinion, please? Thanks in advance!

Of course! First I'd just like to comment briefly on the graphics. I think the sidebar and icon look great. They give off a magical feel and the gradient you chose is gorgeous. I would suggest adding a gradient to the background to bring a sense of unity to the graphics. I also would like to mention that I adore the mascot choice! Going onto the plot, although I have yet to read the Harry Potter series reading the plot made me want to join this roleplay. I have seen a roleplay that has chosen to do different alternate universes but not with a Harry Potter spin. I think the plot is ace. The navigation page is neat but I didn't get that feeling with the characters' page. I think having a full navigation with the wanted characters on that and just a character page with all the taken characters would make the page appear to be more organized. I give this rp a 9/10. Good luck.

[blcsphemy]

Hi! Can we bother you for an opinion, please? Thanks in advance!

I’m not very fond of the sidebar. It could use a gif, and the background is low quality. I like the fact it’s a Harry Potter rp, but the plot isn’t written well enough. It’s a little short and a little vague. You can always ask an rph to help you with writing the plot out properly. But you know, the idea is there and you have a clear vision of what you want. The grey link boxes in the map section are making it hard to read the black text. I would make either the box or the text grey or white. Like I said, the idea is there but it needs a couple of changes.

[goldenmp4]

Hi! Can we bother you for an opinion, please? Thanks in advance!

It wouldn’t exactly be a bother, so here comes an opinion!

Starting with your url, as usual.. I have no idea what is meant by it. For me it is hard to tell where what ends, but that’s probably just me. I’ll just continue and leave the url for what it is.First thing I see when coming onto your page: Marauders map. I admit I fangirled a little. I love Harry Potter and the Marauders as any other, or more. Anyhow, your graphics are not the greatest. The background isn’t great quality and the text on your graphics doesn’t really work. Do I see the castle in the shape of the mape, though? Or is that imagination. I like it if it is true, although you can’t see it very clearly.Your plot.. You start very, very abruptly and it is not pleasant. Your entire plot I don’t know in what time your story takes place. You do mention the marauders once, but it doesn’t seem important in any way, which to me it is. Make the time of happening clear. I read the little explaination afterward to get the actual idea of the rp.. It is very.. Chaotic in practise. Or it will be. I have no idea what kind of AUs you are going to throw them in, but it will get messy. I’m just so confused about the plot. It is, therfore, not great.The rules are clear, I don’t know what is meant by slurs, but you probably banned it with a reason.. Your character page is.. Well, you have several. I see that you will be posting the bio’s, which is great and makes it more logical to split it up into catogories. You also have one overlooking page for the general. Nice.

Already at the ‘Overall’. Your graphics aren’t really anything special. Not really pretty, but we can’t just judge on the themes. I’ve seen worse anyway. The plot is confusing and not written in a way I’m comfortable with.. The idea doesn’t pull me in either because it is bound to get chaotic. The rest of your roleplay is clear and follows most basics. Not really the rolepay for me. It needs a little work, but I wish you the best of luck.

[emiliaofrps]

Hi! Can we bother you for an opinion, please? Thanks in advance!

Of course you can love! Your theme is lovely and simple and I love how when you hover over it the candles in the Great Hall come up! It’s so easy to tell it’s a hp rp and as an admin you seem adorable and really mature! Your plot sounds really interesting but perhaps a little strange and confusing? I’d suggest adding an example at the bottom just so that roleplayers can know what to expect. 

[htmlbykate]

Hi! Can we bother you for an opinion, please? Thanks in advance!

Absolutely! It’s not a bother at all, hun.

First of all, I think you should know that I know very very little about Harry Potter so I’ve never been much into the Hogwarts roleplays and all that. However, I do commend you on making it pretty obvious to even someone like me who is clueless, that it is a Harry Potter rp just from your use of the recognizable font and matching gradient. Other than that, your theme is pretty simple but it’s not horrible looking. I think it’s your background that is really bugging me about your theme because it doesn’t really match your sidebar or your colors. So, I would just put the gradient on that also so it fits better with everything else. I do like how it doesn’t repeat, though, because that is literally so annoying to me. Your plot is pretty cool, particularly the part about the AU’s. I feel like that will make it really interesting and possibly even attract some members that aren’t necessarily into Harry Potter. The last thing I have to say is that I love your mascot. She is amazing.

This isn’t my type of roleplay, I believe, so I can’t say I’ll be joining but I will rec it because it is one of the better Harry Potter roleplays I’ve seen out there. Good luck and I hope this roleplay goes a long way!

[abbeyofrp]

Hi! Can we bother you for an opinion, please? Thanks in advance!

You’re not bothering me at all, don’t be silly! On first impressions, I can’t really tell what your roleplay is about since the icon and URL are quite obscure really. When I load up your blog, I know it’s a HPRP because of the font you’ve used. It’s cool that you’ve found the exact font from the movie! I’m not a huge fan of your theme not because of you, just the layout of it in general. I love the graphics though, they’re cute. Your links are easy to find and navigate which is good. I’ll admit I did struggle to understand the plot until I actually read the summary at the bottom which is good that you’ve included that and now I understand the URL too! To conclude, it’s lovely to see that your faceclaim is underused which is always a positive sign. However, females always tend to be used by the admin so I would have preferred it if you had used a male. Overall, you’ve done a great job and I’m tagging this as a rec. Well done!