If it's not too much asking, do you think you could look up Marianne's dialogue too? I'm just curious about her in general but I'm sure you'll find something that... was changed.
No pbs !
I haven't found a lot of glaring differences, and the ones I noticed aren't about Marianne herself but more about the persons she's talking to
First I found this, uh, glaring difference in her Tru Piss ending with Ferdie :
Pat nuked the "re-training" and the "under the pretense that it was domestic training" or the "when her talent was recognised"...
Like, Marianne's shrewd dad pretends to train her to become a housewife, and only when her talent at not domestic training is recognised she goes to Ferdie ?
Mmh... I wonder if margrave edmund isn't counting on her as a spy or something - under the pretense of training her to become a housewife, he actually teaches her to do spy stuff and she becomes a covert agent in Adrestia...
Hey, it'd make a nice AU!
In the other endings, they work together with Edmund to restore the land, but where he apparently isn't able to do anything on his own like the badass he is in the original text, in Pat's version Marianne had to chime in.
In the og ending, she and Ferdie try to become a bit independant from him and restore Aegir little by little, with Marianne's efforts being remarked.
Margrave Edmund's participation in the production of tools is disminished to give Marianne a greater role in the localised ending, but more importantly, it's Hanneman, not Marianne who created the "use crests for peaceful uses" branch, and he used his researches to support her, they never became "the legacy of Marianne's later years".
Tfw the "bird restaurant" was nuked :(
Since Church BaD and religion BaD, the Goddess will feel offended if you bow your head too much.
In the original text though, she would be troubled, not offended in the least, but hey, did y'know Religion BaD?
"They must wield it for their fellow man"
"They must wield it correctly for the world, for humanity"
Come on, without checking the columns, can you guess which line is from Pat?
Nice Nod from JP!Hanneman to his Doro!convo though, using power correctly for the sake of the people and for the world is the reason why nobles exist, or at least, what he believes nobility is.
"that is the reason for the existence of crests" though... yikes - like, I can see Chilon say this to rationalise Nemesis's raid so... oh well
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Not a lot of glaring lolcalisation bloopers save for the usual jabs at Religion BaD and for some reason, disminishing the badass-ness of Marianne's adoptive dad or, in their paired ending, Hanneman's wish to "come out with peaceful uses for crests".
