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[saetyrn9]

I keep seeing you talk about a continuation of your fwb atsumu fic but I don't remember if I read the first part? Could you tell me the title so I can check it out?

Fjjwjfjcks it's not really a fic it started as a thirst, but the additional sequel to it is nearly 6k words by now, so together it may as well be considered one whole fic lol

anyways, here's the original thirst, you may have already read it tho lol

[saetyrn9]

for that post about having the one scene and tryna make a whole plot for it LOL breath play!!

Oooooh inch resting

SO the initial scene I had in mind..........didn't actually come up in that fic LOL it's gonna be in part two.

But, when I sort of reformatted the plot and was trying to figure out how it would all play out, the balcony scene is what came to mind. Not necessarily the balcony itself, but just the throat grab, the intensity build up in a sudden wave, the revelations and words exchanged. That was the first scene that came to mind and I sort of had to work around it to potentially GET to the scene that I'm not going to spoil for part two, but it didn't happen.

The reason it didn't get there is because it felt like too much to get to that point for two people who had yet to negotiate the new terms of this new aspect of their relationship. They had only had these realizations THAT NIGHT. Tbh, even some of the stuff that DOES happen feels a little fast paced, which is why I slowed it down a lot by the end of the fic. And I just KNEW Ennoshita wouldn't be the type to recklessly jump into BDSM and choking like there's nothing else to talk about beyond knowing they both want it. Ennoshita is a healthy and educated and considerate person, and MY personal hc is that he's very well informed about how a Dom/sub sort of relationship should function since he really wants that dynamic to be an aspect of his relationship, and wouldn't just yank the reader into it all of a sudden.

uwu thank you for asking about my Breath Play fic! I enjoyed talking about it more in depth!!!