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Where can I submit my oc? I don't know if you want them here or what.

http://atocreviews.tumblr.com/submit

Just use the submit box

Hey I spent a good amount of time on this but I tend to be pretty horrid at making fan trolls so hopefully you can help me with this.

SS: i'll try my best, but for future reference, could you please use the submit box rather than fanmail? it leaves us mods in a weird place since we can't edit the actual post, we don't know if you want it private, and some of us (me, namely) aren't comfortable associating our main accounts with the review blog, which i'm p sure answering a fanmail would do! the submit link is (currently) at the top of the blog, and if you ever can't find it just add /submit to the end of our url. thanks

NAME: Kebect Anapas (Kebect is an adaptation of Kebecht which in Egyptian lore is the name of Anubis` daughter, and Anapa being the Egyptian pronunciation of Anubis.)

SS: sounds cool to me

SYMBOL: Her SYMBOL looks like stylized set of scales (for weighing things) as Anubis was said to perform the weighing of the heart.

SS: ohhh also sounds neat

AGE: 7 sweeps

BLOOD COLOR: yellow

POWER: she has the odd ability to reanimated dead animal. This takes immense concentration and the creatures continue to decompose after reanimation she uses the animals to fight and for transportation sometimes.

SS: i suppose this reanimation isn't actually reviving the creatures, but more like using their dead bodies as tools? and they unanimate once she loses concentration? are there size restrictions? btw i love yellowbloods with movement/energy related powers that's like my personal headcanon ha

Trolltag/quirk: putrifyingExplorer cannot come up with a quirk

SS: what if she maybe replaced something with x's because dead. or used a prefix/suffix like a dead emote x_x just some ideas i'm p bad at quirks myself ngl

INTEREST: likes to embalm dead animals and add them to her collection buried in her back yard. Loves playing board games, even though she usually plays by herself she will talk smack and play as two pieces. (SS: omg that's super cute) Likes to explore, often goes in search of imaginary buried treasure and fights pretend monsters.

PERSONALTY: Kebect tends to be very childish, often playing games of pretend. Although she is childlike she is also morbid, speaking of death and dying with enthusiasm and curiosity. She gets overly excited over small things, speaking fast and jumping up and down clapping her hands. Kebect would love to have more friends, but frankly she freaks people out, so her best friend is a bleached skull she calls bowtie because the troll corpse she stole it from was wearing one. Has a strong sense of right and wrong and closely follows the thermoelectric, being very respectful and obedient to trolls higher than her.

SS: she has some aradia vibes, but it's not too bad. It's not so much that she has an interest in death, but that she has that interest while also being a smiley explorer, which makes sense given her theme, really, but... tread carefully, is all i can say

FETCH MODUS: scales items are weighed and in order to be removed they must be replaced with something of equal or greater weight

Strife specibus: bonekind a femur sharpened at one end used as a spear and bludgeon.

LUSUS: JackalMom a troll sized jackals with two tails

Hive: A stone pyramid built full of tunnels, dead ends and Bobby traps with a large graveyard surrounding

ANCESTOR: Gravedigger

SS: she looks good, mostly, besides the few things i mentioned. not entirely sure how to best advise you to step away from the aradia vibes. the egyptian theme is good for that, i think, but maybe you could throw in another interest or something to deviate her away a bit more. really, it's not terribly similar at this point, so i'll just say be careful. make sure her voice is distinct and her own, naw what i mean?

anyway, thanks for submitting and feel free to resubmit if you make any changes!

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SS: the image isn't working! D:

NAme: Lepust Jalope from 'scientific name' for jackalopes Lepus temperamentalus Planet of Origin: Alternia Blood color: Pale yellow Lusus: winged antelope mom (because in the original jackalope myth they had pheasant hind legs) SS: ahhh yes i love it Lusus relationship: Lepust and her Lusus have an on again off again relationship, antelope mom is very flightly, easily frightened and often leaves for lengthy periods of time, however she has instilled a very strong fight or flight response in her young charge. She has tried to teach her to run and hide, however Lepust often takes the opposite approach. Strife Specibus: SawKind (a very large saw with an extremely sharp blade, used as sort of a sword to fight and also to hack cut things trolls) (because some of the biggest jackalope myths come from lumberjacks) Fetch Modus: Logs all items are organized in a giant log and Lepust must cut out what she wants (SS: p good!) Hobbies: Lepust enjoys bouncing through the area around her hive and frightening people with sneaky approaches. She likes silence, too much noise makes her anxious. So sitting in a dark room with her collection of troll horns is quiet enjoyable. She collects horns of hoofbeasts and trolls she's killed, keeping them on shelves in her hive. She often holds them up in front of hers, modeling what she would look like with them instead of her horns. She also loves spying on other trolls for fun. SS: be careful with having a lowblood that kills trolls! it's tricky territory. if she's killed a whole bunch or if they were highbloods-- well, one wrong step and you could slip into the sue. and no one wants that Personality: Lepust is rather jumpy, but fights when she is confronted. She likes silence, and she doesn't talk much. She is very trustworthy, if you tell her a secret she'll take it to her grave, however, she'll know most of your secrets since if shes your friend she's likely to spend hours spying on you. When she speaks she loves riddles, talking cryptically. (SS: ha, i rly like the spying thing. it's adorbz yo) Quirk: She replaces t's as f's because, if you have big front teeth it'll sound like fhis because your feefh hif your lip. Troll Tag: crypticVault (vault both as a locked vault and as jump, like a rabbit) Symbol: Her symbol is supposed to sort of represent a lumberjacks ax SS: overall, everything looks fine so far. sorry bout the short review, but there rly just isn't that much that warrants feedback! i rly dig the use of the jackalope mythos tho. like, a lot

thanks for submitting and feel free to resubmit if you make any changes!

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A reaper wearing a Santa suit comes into the book store and moves all of the books out of their order, all the while yelling "are you uncomfortable yet?"

"What the hell!?" Chi An snapped, throwing her hands up in frustration.

"Bitch, does this seem like a game to you? A FUCKING game?" The librarian pinched the bridge of her nose trying to calm herself down.

"You should be happy that I don't have a pair of scissors with me, for I will CUT you. Now if you know what's good for yourself, get your damn ass out of the room right now or so help me, I'll rip off remove your damn arms from disorganizing anything else."

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Hello! I'm the person who asked about mental disorder trolls before. They wouldn't actually have the disorder, they would kind of represent it in a way. Here is the first troll, whose 'theme' is bipolar disorder. Her pic is on my blog Name: Trulo Snolta Symbol: on the pic Title: Gem of Mood Troll tag: moodyMaid Typing quirk: uses emotes depending on her rapidly changing moods, >:| :( :D ;p when having a meltdown she smashes keys Personality: Trultos moods change rapidly and rather unpredictably

Continued ask With these mood swings it became rather difficult to fill any of her quadrants. She can be seen as strange at times, but ever since she was a young grub and the others teased her she's wanted to fit in. She tries to control her moods thru meditation. Fetch Modus: mood ( every item is assigned a mood and she has to be in that mood to retrieve it) Strife Specibus: glove type Lusus: beemom (because bees are easy to anger and calm) Hive: tower of cards Interests: playing cards,

Continued again Meditating, trollboxing Age: 7 sweeps Blood color: yellow green (not lime) Land: Land f Cards and Calm

im not a big fan of the idea still, to be honest, but thats just me.

first things- names generally follow a 6-6 pattern and the first name is 5. lots of people disregard that so it should be fine if you choose to keep it

i cant judge the symbol and such because i dont see a picture of her, just one that i believe is the one you had me review the other day?

what causes her moods to change so easily for the worst when she's such a low blood color? most of the extreme anger problems are seen with blue-indigo bloods (vriska, equius, gamzee) so i believe thats more commonly a higher blooded thing

where does card playing fit in with her, and troll boxing? i can see troll boxing a little as it could kind of help her mood some (though just calling it boxing would probably be fine). also, how does she live in a tower of cards? hives are built at a young age from trolls by drones i believe.

if she's 7 sweeps old the drones would probably be coming around soon to collect her genetic material. if she has neither romantic quadrant filled then she'd probably be culled soon.

the title gem of mood i dont like too much, mainly the class. i think that something that gives her kind of a goal to work towards and teacher her woudl be good (Monk of Mood maybe?)

the quirk is a bit dry for me personally, as is the trolltag. im not sure where maid came from in it. cantankerous or irascible could be synonyms for moody which both mean crabby, or volatile too

im no fan of this idea, and i think you shoud research the disorders a lot before you attempt this (mental disorders are a risky ground, especially for kind of satirizing) to make sure you have it really accurate.

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What do you think of a group of fantroll a with various mental disorders as their 'theme'

iii would be very VERY careful when it comes to mental disorders with trolls. lots of people stick them on to be "edgy" and "cool" while in troll society, if you're bad genetically you're killed to keep the gene pool clean (a sort of extreme version of survival of the fittest.) i wouldn't use mental disorders as their theme. maybe as a side thing, but not a theme. and even then, if you do use mental disorders on trolls, make sure you research the disorders very well before hand! knowledge is important when it comes to representing such things realistically.

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Name: Zratha Helixa Symbol: upside heart chakra symbol Title- Bringer of Hearts Chum handle- unhappyLover Quirk- uses 3 a lot, like a broken heart, types the letters pain in caps like "why doesNt ANyoNe love me 3" Personality: usually depressed or feeling lonely, hates groups of people. She is mute by choice, gets to nervous to speak so she pantomimes. Hates seeing happy matesprits so she tries to break them up. Fetch modus- (no ideas maybe you could help me) Strife Specibus- slingshotKind

(Continues from last ask) Interests: breaking up couples, watching and reading sappy romances, writing sappy poetry an love notes, collecting rocks Age: 8sweeps Blood color: green Land of stones and tears

i think youve got a fairly good troll going here but i do have some suggestions for you!

her title should be one syllable and hearts is covered by heart in the comic

im assuming she capitalizes N like because of her symbol which looks kind of like a n which is good. im not a big fan of the 3 but with her character it seems to fit pretty well, so i'd say keep it if you like it!

id say her trollian handle is a little bland, personally! synonyms or similar words are nice to use in trollian handles and thesaurus.com is an online thesaurus that can help you find some!

why is she usually depressed and lonely? hate groups of people? mute by choice? why does she target matesprites and not moirails or kismesistudes (i think thats the correct word)?

maybe for a fetch modus she has to write a poem or love note about/to the item? poem would have to be longer/item would be harder to "woo" depending on the size/importance of the item

why does she like collecting rocks?

what is her hive and what is her lusus?

green is a bit vague of a color and im not too sure what color you mean! just keep in mind those of kanayas blood caste, the jade bloods, are quite rare!

Land of Stones and Tears seems fine to me!

from what i can see here, your troll still needs a bit of tweaking. try to expand on some of the things about her, her backstory etc.

thanks for sending her in, though!

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