#asksokea

[askchaosphoniexscharacters]

Open RP

It was a rather long walk from the battle grounds as Sokea heaved a heavy sigh, dragging her scythe beside her through the woods. It was one thing that they alerted about a class 10 nightmare attack, she just didn't anticipate 5 at the same time for the night.

"They get more daring as they come," she uttered under her breath as she made her way home.

[artandoccritiques-blog]

Alright, So I am going to be doing art critiques on this blog, and start to start off I found this artist, Chaosphoniex, on DA I have looked through a little of her  work and I want to Point out a few things that could be better about her art.

 Too Start This Drawing right here. 

This "Lovely" Lady is Phoniex

I normally care less how someone has their character dress, but certain things do piss me off. Take her pants for example. 

THEY ARE WAY TO LOW ON HER HIPS! 

They are right above her womanly bits, right above. WHY?! And where is her underwear? Does she not wear any?

My Advice: Either Add Visible underwear or pick up her pants. 

Also, another OC on this woman's account, Elena I believe her name is, looks a lot like this Phoniex. They have the exact same outfit. Only difference is gems on Elena's hands. 

My Advice: Add more variation to one of these characters, seriously their design is too similar and could easily be confused.

Something else wrong with this drawing: Why is her belly button so large? Why is her Head so Pointy and kinda....square/Rectangular?

My Advice: Soften the lines on her head, give her a more defined face shape.

[askchaosphoniexscharacters]

Shopping Madness

To say the least, Sokea was both looking forward and a little worried to the shopping trip with Chaos and Madnug. Though it wasn't as if she was going to let Madnug's comment about organs get to her. No not really....though she WAS concerned about those who had to clean the mess up for it. She sighed a bit as she waited for Madnug after getting her cloak, which was almost torn up to pieces, together and something to carry all of her things when she got back.

'I just hope this doesn't end in chaos...'

[askchaosphoniexscharacters]

An Odd Meeting

It was a normal routine for Sokea. All she had to do was make a much better cure for breast cancer that didn't involve a painful injections and that was it, just work on reviews and paperwork right after. 'All right just one more drop and I'm done,' she thought until she heard something out of the norm. It was like a rip in thin air and she looked to see a portal open up. She blinked before slowly putting away her almost completed cancer cure potion in suspended animation and went to the portal. 'The hell did this come from? I need to figure this out...,' she thought before entering inside to see who was the person who opened the portal.

She did not expect to be trap in a glass container.

Blinking twice with a slow angry expression coming to her face, she almost roared.

"WHAT THE HELL!?"

[virseau-blog]

She really wasn't sure WHERE she was now, but it seemed a bit uncomfortable. It was dark by this bus stop in the middle of a rest stop town, extremely so with the new moon high in the sky. Only flickering, neon lights illuminated faded pictures on the walls around her, they were peeling, written over in graffetti, and sadly the only thing to look at... besides re-reading the itinerary times on the chart for the millionth time.

The gundam lady sat her elbows in her lap, hands clasped around her chin and sighing, feeling terribly bored and alone as she waited.