ok I am officially obsessed.
rafe fic came out SO GOOD. I love love love how you wrote his struggle with his feelings and how it seamlessly transitioned from a bet in his mind into this possessive need to control and have her, it was truly incredible. I feel like this rafe has the potential to be soooo fuckin dark and twisted and I would eat it tf up. I love how reader found out early (?) on that rafe wasn’t owning up to his feelings, but I almost feel like now things will get so much worse for her lol poor girl. loved the way he became obsessed and couldn’t snap out of it, but also how he realized he didn’t want to hurt her in the moment and force her. there’s so many different ways he can corrupt her and mold her into what he wants if he plays his cards right. truly truly INCREDIBLE read and I can’t wait to read more (hopefully, if you intend on continuing it)
and to answer your questions:
1. I think he does to some extent but right now his pride and selfishness is overshadowing it. he def is very possessive of her and it’s like a “I don’t want you but no one else can have you” thing right now I feel
2. will she even have the choice 😅
3. don’t know if I have a specific fav scene bc I just loved loved loved the slow descent of rafes psyche and him struggling with that it was chefs kiss 
AMAZING WORK AS ALWAYS 🫶
Thank you bestie! I wanted to combine both your asks together and answer them all in one but tumblr doesn’t let me do that anymore 😭
But yeah! I feel like rafe in general as a character has sooo much potential for being sooo dark and unhinged. But with my writing, a lot of it is just me making it up as I go along. So I could start out wanting to make him super dark and then he might just turn out to be… not as dark bc he caught feelings lmao 😂 I don’t know, there’s so many different directions I can take it in. I can’t wait to start writing part 2. I have so many ideas in my head but nothings set in stone until I start writing hahaha.












